Somewhat similar to the happy xianxia novels...ie: MC has a happy supporting normal family with weak cultivation but finds his hax which is a ship in this case,....its quite its interesting....long chps...well written with proper plot and development..
NOW..normally this would be a suggestion but here I am asking/demanding...dont make this ****ty like other xianxia novels where MC goes after HEAVEN DEFYING BEAUTIES..and in most cases rapes them or gains their " ACCEPTANCE"...cause he is strong...then they separate for some BS and MC collects a massive harem...complete ****ty and shallow relationships...****ty MC and lovers,.....try too build the romance,.......keep it happy and fluff..no sad separation or any angsty betrayal ****...keep harem small........make MC smart and OP and not a naive forgiving idiot,.....kill all enemies no mercy .......
Anyway goodluck.....
Definitely one of the most interesting and strange stories I ever read... The author tries to make something I've never seen before work, and does a pretty good job...
IN THE END I DIDNT DO ANYTHING IM SO STUPID!!!
Parasyte System is an enjoyable albeit flawed power fantasy. Let me briefly unpack that. I have now read every chapter currently available on Webnovel, and I have to say, this is a mixed bag. I'll start with the good. The story is interesting. The backstory of the proliferation, The three classes and their different attributes is intriguing. The characters are charming. There is a lot to enjoy about this Webnovel. If the story ended here, I'd have no problem strongly recommending this story to anyone who crosses my path. Unfortunately, the story doesn't end here. There is a myriad of problems with this Webnovel. I'll now unpack the most egregious.Giving some credit where its due, for a non-native to the English language, the author is very promising. I've seen webnovels on this platform written by native English speakers done worse. That isn't to say this is done well. The biggest gaffes of this work isn't even related to the English language, but rather writing conventions. I'll start with the most unforgivable. The author begins the story writing in the first-person perspective. A few chapters down the line, the author moves into the third-person perspective. I understand the reason. Worldbuilding is difficult in the first-person. It isn't impossible, but it is difficult. The author made the choice to break free from the perspective he chose in order to easier tell a bigger story. The issue is, he never went back to change the first few chapters into the third-person. Chapters after the impromptu change, I was still unsure as to what was happening, who was narrating, who exactly we were meant to be following. I did eventually key onto the change in POV, however, were I not internally compelled to carry on, I would have dropped this webnovel immediately. It's not an easy fix, but it is a necessary one. The first few chapters really need to be changed to reflect the authors chosen POV. The next big issue, not fatal like the one above, but still bad, is the author's maddening choice to constantly repeat information that has just been provided, A character will say something, conveying information to the reader, the author will then repeat the information provided in dialogue in the narration. Why do this? It baffles me. It really detracts from the work, Breaking away from this convention is a small change that would radically improve this work. Another issue is that there is a lot of telling and little to no showing. Emotions are not conveyed through the use of creative writing, the reader is just told what the characters are feeling. This isn't as much of a problem as the two issues stated above, however, fixing it would really improve this webnovel.I'm certain that there are more issues with this webnovel, but that isn't to say that it's not an enjoyable read. Parasyte System is a diamond in a lot of rough. It would blind in its brilliance, but only if the author is willing to really polish.
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I honestly dont usually like novels on PUBG much as theyre mostly super cliche or stupid plot. But this one is good. I hope author can pace this normally and explore other games too!!
This novel is on the rough side, its good but still on the rough side. Why? because this novel barely tells you anything about the world, the background description has not been touch the story development is rushed the character description isn't really is rough l mean...I don't even know the Mc's eye color it only says "black hair and average face".. l mean wtf? The writing quality well there isn't really anything wrong with But the worst thing is that this damn novel hasn't been updated form AUGUST. I don't even know if this novel will even continue because the author said nothing.. whelp no use crying over spilt milk. overall novel good but don't get your hopes up. Later
Story is amazing with an immortal character whose gone through life in interesting ways. He didn't start out as some god he suffered 90,000 years of loniless and torment. Before making his family and did I mention he absorbs other Mutants powers. He also ain't no simp MC he gets them girls but isn't like every Mc in harem story seducing ever woman he sees. The romance build up happens naturally and there's a good amount of detail on his past and the overall history of this parallel earth and his interaction in it over the past 100,000 years. Goes into a fair amount of detail around the world and its interactions shows a lot of emotion but still keeping it hilarious. The action scenes are incredible a lot of fighting and Mc is brutal. Has a wide cast of characters who play important roles whether it be in his past or in the present and how they defined him. Including on why he's attending a super high school occasionally rest of time he's traveling the globe. The Mc also loves trolling people It shows he intreracted with famous historical figures and people from legends his growth as person and his desire to die but being unable. This world is full of mutant characters. If I were to describe it those Universe is like the X-Men universe and a fantasy world had a kid who then had a kid with Sci Fi Elements and had Martial Arts/Wuxia ancestry.
I have to say...Solid stuff. Solid stuff indeed. That is to be sure. The writer here knows what he/she is doing. It’s easy to read. Give it a go.
Wow! Sci-Fi! I loved science, but here is wondrous! But I'm into mystery and horror, this story can give someone interest your taste. It was like an Action Movies, great wars are difficult to write most in the battles. But hey, who knows that you can write the most detailed battle ever? This is a great story author! Keep up the good work! :)