Potential starter with great story buiiding.. I enjoy the way story describe character and i have a fun to look with a family play together..And you know what.. Spoiler alert.. Joker.. What a nice class.. That was wonderful idea.. And with skill of card dice and token.. You really like to gamble man.. Good luck with the plot armor.. Im in, so go forth sailing with your tales...
Fantastic story writing love from indian???????? bro make it in trending ???????????? and plz mass realse to 50 chapter to make it recommend by webnovel on front opening
The storyline and the plot is written really well. It's hard executing a good time travel story and plus it has reincarnation? You're really amazing and creative for pulling something hard. You're hard work in writing the story pays off for being amazing, I'd totally recommend this to some of my friends.
I really enjoyed reading your story. Your beautiful language style and detailed plot make this story quite complex. I've read a few chapters, and it's addicting me! excited for the next update.
everything is good so far i have read up to 132 chapters and the writing quality,stability of updates,battle systems and world backgroun were pure
gold this is the best novel i have read so far
Wow i hope it gets picked...i love that mc will be a villain behind the scenes
Really worthwhile read, the author just needs to check he gets the right gender (she/he) a couple of times but apart from that there’s no glaring translation errors. The story is entertaining and a fresh take on the disciple/template trope which doesn’t become boring after the first 10-15 chapters.
The MC is a little bland and low key but that doesn’t mean he accepts bullying in his normal life he will use his disciples to take revenge on people that have slighted or attacked him before.
His disciples chatacter building is a little shallow but I expect that as more chapters get released and they get more story time that they will be fleshed out some more and made more interesting.
So far definitely one of the better options to vote for.
Quite an interesting story. The protagonist seems to be in quite a tight spot having to risk his life all the time. Interesting to see his adventures in what he calls hell.
All I have to say is that this book is one of the best I’ve ever read, and I’ve been in the novel community since around 2018! Alright, now go read.
Wait, why are you still here? *sigh*, fine, I’ll Do a comprehensive review…
Writing Quality- The author has a perfect grasp of the English language, 10/10.
Updating Stability- I usually give 5 stars for this category if it’s 7 or more chapters, but we get 14 daily chapters! 10(+10)/10.
Story Development- Amazing, and the author’s tied up all loose ends with little to no plot holes! And the satisfaction of watching Gravis grow was great. 9/10, but since you can’t rate like that, I’ll round up to 10/10
Character Design- 100/10, the characters are logical, they talk, act and feel like real people and they are amazing, one of the best parts of this book!
World Background- Loved it, and everything was explained in heavy detail, you can tell the author spent a lot of time on it. 9/10.
I love this WN and have been reading on a daily basis from ~chapter 700, so I may be a little biased….
TL;DR: Character Design is its strong points, but everything else is amazing, and ________ (no spoilers!) was a great Antagonist
Not my cup of tea personally because of the sexism in this story. Such as “Don’t waste your words like women, be a man” “Even a man most likely couldn’t do it, but she’s a delicate girl.” Roughly, im not gonna go back to the story and specifically go back and read through just to find those remarks but that’s roughly what it said.
writing style and grammar needs to improve but the story is enjoyable to read and you would want to know further story while reading so I hope author continue to write this novel for many more chapters.
and i would like a mc who is more confident and clever and also true to his desire without hurting people...
Raw is here: 网游：我有怪物合成模拟器
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