Its indeed is very good story, i love how THINGS were going in this novel, you are doing great work brother, i hope your book will do great.
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Great premise, with interesting characters. There are only a few chapters so can't give an accurate review. But reading the first 30 chapters, the plot looks promise. The romance is subtle and the pace is slow at first. The grammar could be improved, hopefully, the author updates more frequently. The power system is also very interesting, looking forward to how it unfolds. Maybe I will come back later and binge.
unbelievable it was very unbelievable. This novel is on a whole different level.I stumbled here upon chance. The story is good from the start but when I reach chapter 20+ all turns arbitrary and seems the story direction is very poorly planned. What the use of level 2000000 if the IQ is very low. I can't believe I just wasted my time reading this. I understand the premise of the story and it's definitely something other readers would like, but it's not something that I would read past 30 chapters.I rate it 5 stars. Let's try if the Author will delete this rate of mine. Because I heard that they could delete this if they don't like the review.
Raw please can't sit still the novel is picked and the released, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssseeeeeeeee anyone has any idea of the title for the Raw translation ?????
Yeah it seems good so far I recommend Filler song again……Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?Gunter, there were tears there.If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
At first, I was like here we go... another story of someone reincarnating and going into a VR game and taking advantage. However, I must say that I am hooked. Good writing that is easy to follow what's going on. While we do have an arrogant MC, it makes sense in the story. While he does have great fortune early on, it's not like he is completely OP. It is a good read to add to the library.
interesting story, make you want more, curious how MC will become with the god of war legacy.
will wait for more. keep it up author, so far so good.
thanks.
I like it
This book is the example of good ideas, but poor choices. You can clearly notice when the author switched from good writing to just pure s*x and dirty/lowkey s*xist jokes. However, chapter 741. I can overlook and cringe at edgy 13 year old humour, but what the author writes is borderline r*pe of the main character. His best friends get him seriously dr*nk, and the girl that had a crush on him for 'years' (An example of another forgetten storyline from chapters ~400) takes him to a bed. She when cl*mbs and makes red marks on the bed to suggest that they had s*x and guilt trips him next morning to have s*x again. This is not cute, and as someone that had a similar experience, the least the author could had done is given a trigger warning. I even wonder how webnovel would allow something like this on their site.
absolutely amazing but the first 40 chapters are the intro to when the story really starts the writing was amazing and if u can bear read for 40 chapters with amazing detail then the story really seems to start can't wait for more
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