This story is quite great if you looking for a story that is a game and with the main characters not OP and ruthless like most other than I highly recommend this one.
This book is a hidden masterpiece! Although it's not satisfactory for short-readers that don't really. I like sophisticated much but for me, I do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to reduce your point. The characters might need some development since it's lackadaisical but I can handle it. I gave it 5 stars since I do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4-star rating! Anyways go on writing and upgrading. Your grammar, tenses, and vocabulary need to be something that everyone understands, That's for your book to be more engaging!
From the creators of Release that Witch, comes a new bewitching Eastern Fantasy, one that involves Demons.... Demonic Beasts..... obviously you can catch them..... POKEMON !!!!
I am just a troll. Ignore me.
Bad spelling, cringy and the system does everything the mc asks without restrictions or requirements. MC is like a kid...........,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,..................
Welcome to the story!
This is not a shameless review by the author. I believe this novel deserves 5-star.
You might say that every author thinks that way about his own story. And I think you are right but I want to put forward some pros and cons pointing out as to why it deserves 5-star.
I won't be listing them separately as pros and cons as I believe that some points that might be cons for some readers might be pro for the other.
1. The story revolves around a dystopia and unlike those many 'just dystopia' it indulges in not only the dangers and injustice but also the aftereffects of such a defective system and also how the residents are emotionally affected by such an environment.
2., Unlike other novels where MC is absolutely weak from the start or absolutely strong from the start (a bit too strong making a mess of the story where every problem is a problem only until MC arrives), this novel has an MC who is physically average at the beginning but has the mental fortitude of a killer. So you have it, weak from the outside strong from the inside. (this is only true in the beginning MC grow in strength)
3. The story is mostly focused on the MC so there aren't multiple PoVs.
4. The writing quality I believe is good enough.
5. The story has a setting that is a mixture of occult literature and shinobi background.
Até o momento, capítulo 9:
Qualidade de escrita 5
Estabilidade de atualização 5
Desenvolvimento da história 4
Design de personagem 4
Fundo de mundo 3
Muy buena informacion, te animo a continuar con las actualizaciones, realmente son acontecimientos y hechos que muchos pasamos por alto y que realmete merecen ser reconocidos... felicidades sigue asi... :D
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Well, the only problem about this is the grammar. If you fix it, it would be a masterpiece. Keep up the good work, and take some breaks if you have to. Writing can get sloppy with tired fingers.
Great way of opening. It has few chapters but I can imagine the potential of the story. I was completely immersed with the flow of the story. Too bad the story is just born. Looking forward author san.