I think this is a good book, I like the blood knights shit and Rena op level up ability or whatever I think it’s pretty cool, you don’t get one scene with Lilith until like ch 18 and it’s not even the real her, it’s her in a trial, like brother it’s the whole premise.Also i have a strong inkling this is at least AI edited because, it’s not that certain phrases come up a lot, but when introspective dialogue about how a nighamisnt afraid anymore or is ready for what’s next. It’s just a bit annoying and the book would’ve got a 4 star if not for the sprinkling of slightly annoying corny monologue and dialogue when it doesn’t need to be emotional. I know how it is, I’ve written thousands f words worth of fiction using ai, I can tell after like 4 chapters if something is ai written unless heavely edited by a human after. Other than that great story.
balanced with the thrill, action, and hardships.
Yo it's your author here and I just wanna say thank y'all for the support, I'll be dropping steady 3 chapters each week and you might get a bonus chapter if I ain't too busy, thanks once again, Adios amigos
Author here,If you are interested in checking out this mediocre (probably not even that) book and haven’t read the description, here are a few things to note so you don’t waste your time here:+ No solid schedule (I try my best to write but it’s more like a temporary hobby and it can get quite busy in my personal life)+ Bad pacings and plots holes can be attributed to the above as well as my lacking writing ability+ It can get quite confusing at times + This is a rewrite, but it’s much different from its previous version now+ Author’s note is just some personal thoughts on top of my head at that time, so skipping that is fine. + Not a proficient English userIf you do have questions after reading (and criticisms) you can comment below this post and I’ll answer to the best of my abilities.
I would recommend whole heartedly for those seeking a good read to give this novel a try. The world background is promising and well developed so far at 38 chapters in. The characters don’t feel 2 dimensional and the grammer is great. I can tell this novel is a hidden gym and it’s best to get in on it early :)Chapter upload is also consistent and fast which is also another +1 on why you should read this novel.
It’s a good start and keeps the reader engaged. Kieran is unlikable and if it becomes too much revolving around the scheming love rival (Amelia) then it will become boring and cliche. At this point Kieran needs to start redeeming himself and the story will move more in the direction of trials they may face.
This book is amazing. I like the fact that the female lead is an independent and free spirited woman who knows what she wants.
of you want your fill on fluff, read this novel! I'm looking forward to the conclusion but I'm happy with the journey to this point! thank you author and bless you!
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My..My....The arc of Athlea was heavy and how the climax unfolded of Zero doing in front of her husband....Ahem* Though I am sad that she left away..hope she returns in future..Great Story overall!!!
I like the story so much l am waiting for next episode and all best for to achieve what you want even I like the characters you have put in the story and concepts are nice
Very interesting read so far I like it keep up the good work