Hi, just a message from the author. This is my first book in a while. I plan to update daily through summer so please feel free to leave reviews or comments, Thank you.
The first five chapters are worth reading alone. It's also well written, funny, and kind of depressing as well. Author, please keep writing. I need this in my life lol
I have to say, this story is clearly on point!The whole description is enough for one to fantasize it just so we can get an idea of the scenery.Writing quality is ??I'm hoping for more chappies author ?
This book is great ?✌️??
Not horrible, but also not amazing.Sentence structure is a bit jarring to read, and the statement pacing is strange. My main issue is the lack of knowledge as to how Esports works, though. It's very clear to me that the knowledge on the operation of an esports team and the players practicing habits, plus the coach, that the writer does not have any experience in the esports scene. The display of a very rudimentary and romanticized version of esports is very prevalent in this novel, and detracts greatly from the experience.
The best hook I ever read. At first it confuse me, but now I understand that the first paragraph is the flashback. I really want to know the MC as a character and the world.... Oh my god, the most expansive worldbuilding I have ever seen and I only get a glimpse of 10 chapters.
The story plot are different and amazing... Especially family really great... It was so interestingHave a nice day...
For me it has been a great novel, I liked it a lot, it was one of the few cultivation novels that I have read, and I suppose it was all due to this system and largely due to the story as well, although I would have liked it to have been possible go to Earth, but hey, it's still been a great story and and is sad to know that the story doesn't continue.
It is a good book with good characters, world building, development, and plot and better than many other novels out there and definitely worth it
This is my own work so I will of course be biased and give it 5 out of 5 stars. Also I've never written anything like this before, so for the time being I'm just having fun with it. I hope you can enjoy it and please leave insights if you can.
This story has a very good potential. I`m adding this into my library. I hope you will release more chapters. Good luck.....................
This is a different and lighthearted take on the VRMMORPG genre. The work is fun without requiring too much from the reader. The young MC works as a driver and happens to meet and befriend a genius game creator. He becomes the only beta tester and is handed his friend's legacy with a responsibility to ensure the game stays fun for everyone.As a result, the story is similar to a reincarnation novel except the MC is not using the game to fulfill his wants and needs. Nor is he preventing an apocalyptic future. He is only there to have fun. The MC is not very selfish or obsessed with women. He tends to act like an advisor or guide so other players don't miss out on certain secrets. However he also sometimes acts like a supervillain as he becomes ridiculously OP in an attempt to steer the world quests away from certain outcomes he thinks will not be as fun for the players.As of chapter 78, the story remains balanced, interesting, and lighthearted. There are even a few mysteries to wonder about.My complaints about this novel are:1. The constant but minor grammatical errors.2. Certain odd repeated phrases. Example: The MC scoffing is used to indicate his nonverbal, positive reply (it's odd because scoffing is an act of derision. Sometimes it makes sense, other times it does not.)3. Many of the characters, MC included, seem too trusting of others and there are rarely any consequences. (this is a minor gripe because, although difficult to believe, it also makes the novel more lighthearted and fun)PS: The author's favorite phrase seems to be "hums with understanding," a phrase both unique and adorable.