This book cured my Depressive state by transporting me to a fantasy world where such novelties don’t exist. All in all a great book, even better author!
Pretty decent read, pace is a bit fast but ok.Main weakness is character development, all of the love interrest are kinda bland and all the same to the point that its hard to tell them from one another, and they fall for the MC straight away basically all at once.The building up is nice although a bit simplistic.MC is smart and not OP, story and world is coherent so its a big pkus.overall its a decent read
this novel is indeed great love the work keep it up ??????
keep the good work man and don't drop this
Hey Author, because you're new, how about taking notes of certain aspects to improve in and asking us about what should be improved on, so we support you more. Take the critic from Erezoth for example that may seem harsh, but if you truly listen to it and take your time off after The first Volume and improve on the story that way, it truly would turn out a banger with Volume 2 , so cheer up and take advice to improve, nobody's perfect from the start so I wish you all the best :] ?
Overall its good, i love mind game, but you must grow your writing. Overall 3.4I waiting this character name Harith negs fodder like Dazai, Sora, and Fyodor. Thi character manipulation and strategy its good tbh
Wow, the story is really making me put a smile on my face. The male character is amazing and how he solves the challenges gives hope to others. I recommend this amazing work
this novel is top notch unlicked those other novels. Give me mmmmmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee
this story is interesting and lovely I love
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the story is good and the character is amazing
not really worth all the hype its been getting. novel is ok`ishchapter length is very small compared to other novels and a lot of the chapters, have repeating information or shows the status info that take up a lot of word count...