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first thing first, how the f someone with unranked talent don't get seat? where the f they sit before getting the talent? floor? and why the teacher think it can help to motivate the student even thought evolving the talent is very hard, impossible even. the future is just a fking cliche over and over and over and over oh and over.
Sorry, but this just isn’t good. Like with most video game novels, there’s no actual risk. Also, him fighting the people responsible for his parents death would be good, but it just doesn’t have any appeal when it’s only in a video game.
Hello. This is my first post and I have just finished caching up with your wonderful story. I found your story as an audiobook on "Zephyr Odin Audiobook (Reborn)" YouTube and had to continue it. I hope you continue to stay active and post updates for your story.
How can such a trash story have so many power stones smh --------------------------- -
I don't mind reading a novel that is written by someone whose english isn't the best. I don't mind a translation that is overly literal if the story is good. But this...piece of work is so badly translated that it makes some MTL look good. I can just barely follow what is going on in the barest of senses and much of the meaning is lost. Might be a good story but no way I am going to read more of this garbage to find out.
Absolute trash, don't read
Cliche trash
Author is trash
Story development is trash
Protagonist arrogant asf
Antagonist young master offended whole clan offended type of trash
Overall novel is trash
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nothing to say, this story has drama, action, romance, whatever you think of and is also based on cultivation. Now it has a tv show called ubtaned and an anime called grandmaster of demonic cultivation made about it. one of the best stories. ?❤?
Can someone tell me what is going on here. People keep rating this story down, yet it has more than 400 votes making it next up. Are some people hyping or faking the vote. I don't want to deliberately down vote the novel but there seem to be something going on
I was able to read eight chapters so far and here is my review:It has an amazing plot. The introduction was able to grab my attention. The looks of the characters are easy to portray since they are detailed. I could also convey their emotions and character interaction is great as well. The novel is not the cliche type since I was captivated to read further with no typos or errors found when it comes to vocabulary. It was an excellent read and I didn't get bored when reading it. The story development is a bit slow which is fine with me since it does not damage the plot. Another negative I noticed was that there were some misused punctuation but nothing to deter from the read. Another positive thing about the novel is the author's writing style. It is definitely better than some authors here in Webnovel. Paragraphs are also in the perfect length and so far, nothing seemed wordy or whatsoever. Good luck to the author!
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