"That's actually a nice story! It starts slowly but smoothly, the writing is simple but effective. I would recommend to anyone to give it a try as it is well writing and managed!
Good luck to the author!
I love all of this. It has a really good potential. Mc is good too. Keep it up author. You can do it . We will support you throughout your journey
The only problem with this novel is the name of the mc is not Bob when it clearly should have been bob however apart from that this is my favourite new novel after manaless magician.
While I will admit to being a bit confused on how exactly the system works I do like the overall concept - being able to improve a cultivation method/skill. I've always wondered about who creates skills in the first place and this is touching on that a bit.
But I also like MC. He's obviously a kind and doting 'father' but he is sufficiently ruthless to his enemies which I like. Clean kills are great. Nice start to this book!
I really like the novel its way different from the rest. The only part I don't like is where the mc sometimes gets scared of his wife and she has also beaten him once, I hope as the novel progresses mc become the dominant one. I don't mind if FL is the dominant one but if she beats the mc and mc is a simp, that is a big NO. That's just my opinion but overall if you ignore this the novel is great .
I read all the chapters that were out. Definitely a good read. Everything is well written. It's so well-written and described that I started trying to find something to rant about. Well... there's nothing to rant about. Just praises![img=recommend]
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You, reader, with a lot of powerstones, send this author some!
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This novel had a very good start, almost exciting. The system is novel and contains hidden dangers.
So what went wrong?
The entire build up is wasted!
MC doesn't die (no surprise) and the story changes from a good novel, driven forward by the motivations and ideas of the MC, to a mediocre political drama in which the MC uses the system to cheat at every opportunity. It just isn't interesting to read about the MC cheating his way to fame and fortune. The world building breaks down at that point as well, what was once a nebulous empire with basic technology becomes a convoluted mess of different political systems with a very narrow technological development path.
It becomes clear pretty quickly that the author has no clue about communication networks and how the basic building blocks of modern technology work.
I could deal with a mediocre and very illogical world, if the plot or characters held my attention in any way, but they don't. The MC becomes 1 dimensional, he even uses a spell to deal with basic communication, the side-characters are stupid cliches and the systems good and evil mechanics become a source of constant frustration.
Im giving a shameless 4 stars that may be undervaluing the novel however i have not read it i just want to express my hope for this book as i like to binge 100+ ch at a time. Take my power stones and I wish you a good future with this book
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First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!