"Beating something into Daisuke is not something we can do, Naruto-kun," Kakashi said, rubbing his one eye. "Or were you not paying attention that night when he beat that contingent on ANBU without killing them?"
"Xia Xia, this is me. I'm not the high above big god Bei Yan in the voice over circle. I'm not the Song shixiong in school. I'm just a man whose eyes are always following you. I'm like all other men, a regular guy who likes you. Are you...willing to continue to go forward with me?"
Well written and paced it will definitely appeal to fans of the genre
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This novel can be summarized in one word: 'boring'. People might think that being a leafling, constantly evolving and slowly getting stronger is fun. Even I thought so at first and I admired the idea and the way the author wrote it, but as it progressed I realized that I didn't enjoy what I was reading at all.To me, this novel is just a copy of slime anime, the reincarnated slime Rimuru, except that Mc goes around training soldiers and playing sergeant. The difference is that he always trains leaflings with low IQ and shares the advantages and knowledge of his system with them. Other than that, it is a similar kingdom building novel.I don't know why it was fun for some people to see him training his little army down to the smallest detail, but for me it was not worth reading. In the same way, it is pointless to try to make another leafling as strong as him in every evolution. These are creatures at the bottom of the power ladder of the world background. You might think that the only advantage of training them would be long term loyalty but that is a big NO. As a former soldier or agent, Mc is too soft on them. In one chapter a leafling was kicking him in the face and he was just indifferent. At least if you are building your own army you have to make them fear and respect for you. It doesn't have to be all of them always like "Yes, Sir!" to you but what's the point if you don't want to keep them under your power and make them follow your orders?To me it was a boring MC. It's too early to talk about world building as the pace of the story is slow. But he and his 'cheat' are completely pointless. If at the end of the story a leafling who starts from the same level as him - from the bottom - will be at the same power level as him and be disrespectful to him, why should I read this sergeant role play novel ?
Honestly, I'd throw my lot down with this novel just from its readability alone. Among the sea of broken grammar and sentences, this thing floats pretty darn well. Most mistakes are so minor that they'd be difficult to spot in a first read. As for the content, the story feels a little rushed at first, but it settles down quickly enough, forming into a straightforward and fun narrative that you can get used to pretty easily. Good work, would recommend.
Very nice story! After reading the synopsis and the first few chapters, I was thinking this novel was right up my alley. It is beautifully done.I hope the author will continue to release more chapters.
Please stop with the random child insertment trope.Mira wasn't even his child and he somehow loves her strongly on the first meeting it doesn't make sense for him to even like her cause she's evidence of another man in his girl
The book is okay. Pretty middle of the road. There are good points, like the world building however the flow feels wonky and a bit jumpy and the grammar whilst decent compared to some of the novels on here, alongside the flow make it pretty hard to read. But I do believe there is a good amount of potential, the author definitely needs some practice as it can be a little boring and the characters a bit odd. Like he's in India, why exactly is he called Nix? His friend Nagendra should never be that calm in an accident, no matter who you are there is always an initial panic and worry.
has author drop it ????.................
I dont think I have ever seen a book writen in this fashion before, and it honestly works! Loving the overall building of the world, even though the first few pages were a little confusing. I cannot wait to see what else this book has to offer!
Gotta support my fellow countrymen. Looking forward to reading this novel I'll give my feedback after reading it.