The story is well written the author seems to know where he/she is taking it, characters are likable,Concerned for his battle prowess,I enjoyed various things but at the same time wish for a bit of crisis or something a bit more exciting than normal,Hope for more chapters as I want more of this ??
Really interesting story. I like how its starting and im really looking forward to see whats next. If i were to complain about something it will probably be the lack of capital letters but its not that big of a deal. All in all i love it, keep writing!
oh my god!! I just loved the way the first chapter is written. The scenes weren't detailed yet they could be understood and virtualized. I enjoyed the first chapter and now turning to another. #lovedthestory
It's a wish fulfillment. Mc just hypnotizes and
fucks women, that's the whole story currently.
Really good story so far, the character development is great and the game system is consistent. The author doesn't forget about what abilities the MC has which is great.
I really liked it
Only the grammar had problems
I'll jus keep up to date
More updates
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It's good, it's nice, it's fantastic, it's amazing, it's great! It's exciting, probably, it's excellent, it's breathtaking, very much want to read. I'M SERIOUS!
This novel has a lot of potential. I believe that as long as it stays in this level of interesting things, it will be a very good so I hope the author will keep on the good work!
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SUCKS its infested with arrogant young masters every young master be like "i've heard your prestigious name mave we have a friendly duel?" Then young master looses and feels humiliated he want to kill mc...mc kill him arrogant young masters butler> father>ancestors all want to kill the mc ...I HAVE READ TILL CH 120 AND THIS HAS PRETTY MUCH HAPPENED LIKE 10 TIMES IN THAT TIME PERIOD Btw even in fights all mcs fights are like 6 sentences long its usually over in 1 or 2 sword strikesI would not recommend this novel if you expect a wise protagonist or for anyone who likes having brain cells . If you want to enjoy it turn off your brain and put away all the cringe then maybe you could.
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I like the over all detail and the Emerstion that comes as a result of knowing the history beHind the tactics and the troops. !!