VoIkmer
sentient system that follows cliche path of being a jerk to the mc in hopes to create comedy to entertain the reader but never does because it's lazy writing that offers nothing to the story and detracts from what anyone who clicked on this truly want which is a novel focused on the building of a sect with the help of a system.
Rom-com story with OP female lead, haven't seen any struggle but only fluff and FMC spoiling the MC. It is good to read and I give me lot of laughs. Almosta NPC are humorous, you should give it a try.
this rating is for translating names into westernized version.
Even if the novel turns out to be a masterpiece I won't read this version of the translation just because of this one point.
So far as of chapter 13 the story seems quite interesting and I see a lot of potential in this story. However I do think the characters could use some more characterization
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I never liked Sci-fi books, don't know why........but I found this and the name compelled me to it...I have read the first few chaps and I must say that I'm quite impressed.
Currently there's only 3 chapters so I can't for sure say that this is a masterpiece or anything like that... but this has great potential.
The writing style is amazing and there are little to no grammatical errors. So far the plot also doesn't disappoint.
Looking forward to the future chapters. Keep up with the good work author
Hey guys, the author here! Real talk for a second..... this novel is a banger, it's something that'll Stay with you for a long time, it's also my entry for the ongoing competition! I promise, this is gonna be something you'll have a good time following! Peace!
It is the story of an average person getting a portal to the technological world, up to the 17th chapter, there is no young master, no scheming, just a boy starting his business with robots. Update of one chapter is very slow. I need at least 10 chapters a day. Need more, update fast. Grammar and connotation are slightly misplaced but the overall story and character development are good. There isn't much to think about, the story is straightforward and enjoyable to read.
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Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
Venti…. Im just here for venti.
I love this book. I don't normally post reviews but this book has captured my attention enough that I want to continue reading it. 30 chapters are just not enough. one extremely great thing about this book is that except for some few things, the author actually know what he is talking about. Specially about programming. it's rare to find such book. Normally the flaws would have stopped me but this is just too good.Good work author. Thank you for this masterpiece.
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