I've read half the novel at chp 31 and it is almost all filled with filler most of the chapters aren't even needed or do anything for the story of the information in the 31 chapters it would only fill 5 good chapters
This is such a fun read!!
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I really enjoyed reading this segment. It kept me reading and wanting more, occasionally bursting out in laughter. There are definitly a few spelling mistakes that can be corrected.
I will most certanly come back and read it again.
Greetings to those of you that'll arrive at this place at a later date.
As the author, I'll be giving a shameless review of the book. I trust you guys will have a great time reading this book.
The writing quality is good and I'd be happy if you guys drop comments if there's an error found.
The story kicks off with a slow start but it gets fast as it progresses. Although, I said it gets fast, I have to inform you that there are also times where I'll have to make the scenes detailed, making it take one or more chapters.
The characters are good. I try to describe them as much as I can, so you the readers can get an imaginative idea of the character. Not all characters are thoroughly described though. Luke tends to act without brain lots of times and other times, he's as smart as a human can be.
I'll be updating daily for a while. Look forward to getting feedbacks from you all.
The world setting isn't Earth as we know it. It's a different world entirely and I'll slowly but surely bring you guys on a tour around the world.
THANK YOU ALL FOR CHOOSING "REINCARNATION OF AN ALL-ROUNDER"
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IS THIS DROPPED? PLZ CONTINUE NEED MOAAR
The idea was good enough but execution not so much
Things just happen without reason at all and come out of nowhere
too many skips between storylines it feels like "We are doing this now, oops that's a lie, now we are doing that" it feels really weird to read, a lot of unfinished business.
The grammar also doesn't help at all
The character interactions are weird
Overall it feels that things keep changing on a whim rather than planned
This is an emotional book. I've never felt so humbled, reading this beautifully written book. The way the author captured the pains and suffering of the ML is spectacular. I hope things turn around for Leon for the better. Marvelous job author.
It's good. Don't let chapter 36 (if I dont remember wrongly) fool you, even though this chapter may disappoint you with all the soul crystal thing, dont drop the novel yet. It will become better.
The only critic I would make is: the mc is not a villain so the title is misleading and all the plot exposed in the synopsis (three souls in a body and all that stuff) appears only around chapters 100-130 (and is explained quite poorly tbh).
The chapters are too short and have a lot of useless information.
There is no character development. Even though the mc went trough a lot of things and "mental breakdowns" there is no difference between him before the mental breakdown and after that. These mental breakdowns and "lessons" just serve the purpose of making you believe that the main character is growing, but he still acts and thinks the same way.
Anyway, the novel is entertaining if you can ignore or overcome the points mentioned above, so that's all that matters I guess
A lovely story with a very luring setting at the begining. So far it only has 14 chapter but I can't wait to see more from the author. I'm waiting!!