barbarian society teaching us about a man who came on a flying horse and married a 6 ye old girl and consumared it when she was 9 yr old. extremely barbaric religion.
So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews I’ve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming
The story is really a more improved version of the original, It still holds some issues that I had with the original. Namely Ofris, I was hoping he'd be gone or have less of a role in this story compared to the original.
The story structure and grammar seems to be a lot better. Pacing doesn't feel like a bullet train and I am a fan of this goddess, I don't know if I like her more then the original goddess or not.
paid from the start and its just the same chapter 24 times
The story is interisting the MC has a interisting backstory. the concept of mana and futures-tic concept is good
the story is kind of slow at the moment and it might get into pace soon i think..
the romantic bits are good
the author did forget to add some details about the cataracts in between form what iian tell after reading.
bit over all its a good read. i am waiting for the future chapters its getting interisting
Dropped because of too many grammar mistakes. Every other sentence the pronouns get messed up. Apparently MC’s mom married my dad.
The start of the story is great and I‘m looking forward to more updates from the author
This is so incredibly well written!One of the best webnovels I have read so far, unique and innovative enough to never get boring.The author seems to have some crazy mind powers since everytime I start to lose a bit of interest, the next chapter the author pulls me back in with new developments, locations, characters or another breath of fresh air.The mc and the worldbuilding are awesome and you know there is still much more to discover and learn.This story is very dark in the beginning but as far as i have read it lessens, tho is never forgotten. The immersion in this story is there without a question and I enjoy reading so much.Also my personal tastes are met, female mc without romance (yuri would be fine too) + dark story elements and I am happy. But do it so well and more, you got me exited!You may have noticed I am a bit of a fan :)So if you would give a more dark story with a huge flashed out world to dive into a try, this is except for the occasional typos published book quality.I really hope the author sticks to it and grants us more chapters!
This review is from the Author Himself..feel free to ask any questions under here.i hope you would like my novel
i came across this novel on webtoon and i was captivated. i can relate to Leyla's emotions but i wish she'd be more stronger later on. keep it up author
It is a good read until i realised that it is a system story. I dont read system stories but i still leaving behind a good review as it is an interesting story N a good read.
The story could have been so good...
The only real weak point in the story is MC....
MC is actually brain dead like for real his IQ is so low it's unfathomable how he manages to tie his shoes...
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1) It took him like ages to figure out he was a vampire
2) When he finds out it takes him like 2 chapters to tell a random stranger all his secrets. (yea bro i have a system and stuff OOOO and btw i'm also a vampire)....
3) He does so much retarded stuff you think he would have killed himself by now...
4)System tells him if you don't drink blood you will run out of hp in 10h
what does MC do? Noting he goes to bed then panics when he wakes up cuz how could he have know his hp would drop ......
5) Has absolute no awareness of all the clues he leaves like if he would just use a bit of common sense....
6) The plot is super forced
In short this novel is super overrated and i have no clue why its up so high.
Brain dead MC ✔
Clueless MC ✔
Below room temperature IQ ✔
No common sense MC ✔
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So in short sure you can read it but don't waste stones on it.