This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write more chapters soon so I’ll be able to read
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I need some more chapters to read when its updated..!!The story is awesome and adventurous..!!Fun to read and fantasy to uphold..!!You guys really should read it for sure..!!
Not a professional breakdown of anything but here is what I think.So boring. Granted I didn’t read much, and maybe it gets better, but what I did read started to bore me quickly. The start of a story should be the good but with it getting stale towards the end, but this was just tedious to read. The idea is cool, and if it was done well it could of been good, but it wasn’t. The MC was pathetic, and there were at least two plot holes. Arthur was supposedly amazing, yet he wasn’t even that good. Supposedly 80% of households watch people play, yet the MC didn’t even know the basic rules of the game. Didn’t make sense to me, I’ve never played some games yet I know how to play them. Another thing, who would just allow a spirit to control your body. It would be horrifying, imagine it. Not being able to control what you do, just being a passenger in your own body. It’d scare he **** out of me. Last thing I’ll mention is that Arthur wanted to create an unbeatable sword art, yet didn’t immediately try and teach his sword art to the MC. That didn’t make sense to me. Having another person well versed in your sword art would allow you to see flaws in it. Just my opinion, and I’ve only read about 20 similarly themed novels.
I like this novel. The sincerity shown by the author by speaking freely,has added a dash of permanence to the novel. The story development is fluid. Although MC is an omnipotent guy,still the struggle shown by him,the emotions,the sincerity - it all make this nove a refreshing one and hard to put down.
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I would very much like this novel to be picked. It is interesting, unique, and has a good flow. The only thing I’m potentially worried about is the pacing. I fear that he is getting strong too quickly and will run out of routes to grow stronger. But it had to be done in the first 40 chapters to get people to vote, so maybe the pacing will slow down. Alternatively, it’s just a translated novel and it doesn’t care about getting selected and that’s just how the pacing is gonna go
I like it! Good luck on your exams!!
I like this story very much. I wish for you to continue publishing it until the end of the story
I read this on royal road. Saw he transmigrated to here. Lol. Writing grammar is raw...but good imagination and entertaining overall. I figure with a dedicated editor he would do much better. Do give this a read. Just bear with the writing grammar.