this is truly one of the best books I've ever read <33
it impacted me so profoundly, unlike anything ever has in the past
I have no real issues with the translation or stability of update; they're fairly standard. The issues I have are with the parts put in place by the original author. The MC is supposed to care deeply for his new family, but neglects them until he is forced to pay attention. The world has a impossibly large population given how frequently people die, and how small families are. Everyone up to chapter 73 is evil or a coward (or both) beyond a handful of people. Oh, and there is a lot of repetitive padding in the writing, definitely a "paid by the word" author.
This above all is a intresting novel only problem is some grammer mistake not much though and I would reccomend to any fellow readers who like pretty reliable mc who is somewhat op considering his believers you can find out what's op about them once you read the novel
The character has no backbone, couldn't even refuse a simple request from a girl. Disappointment. I like the idea of the story, but the characters are just bad. Forced and emotionless. Also, the MC is cowardly and dense. Not being able to connect any information. It was clearly forced for the plot.
Ultimately I'm dropping the story because of the MC's lack of strong will to oppose others and terrible character development. Which resulted in a bad MC.
Hai! I wanna say that your story is great! Keep up with the good work, author!
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I won't even lie, this is amazing. I'm adding this to my library. I could relate so much to the description because I still get nightmares more than dreams. I know the struggle.
The first chapter blew my mind away, Jane's character is great. I hope you write a story about just dream, developing it further with your imagination. Kudos!
so far the novel is good
_the plot is promising that demonstrates that you have a rich imagination
_i want to ask you is he going to become overpowered 'step by step' or 'fast' ?
_is there going to be harem ? in case there is one how many members?
Great story, keep up the good work ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Honestly, I’m Mr. Handsomest.Saying that I’m the handsomest does not make me narcissistic! I’m only telling the truth, I’m not being narcissistic!
So a gamer gonna learn some manners. Very interesting read. Hey dear readers over there! Do check this story, I am sure you will find it another addiction.
Very Wholesome. .