super story..... i love the idea that it is incorporated with faith
Well over all this novel is rather good but the MC is complete contradiction of what i expected. In first chapters he was posed as the smart type but the next chapters make it looke like he exchanged 90% of his inteligence for plot armor and somehow some people remind me of poorly made npc's for mmorpg games...
Also what's with the reviews being onlly 5 stars it's like author is deleting all other reviews... and why do i get this notification when i wanted to write the review when there were at least 5 reviews allready...???
"WoW! You would be the first reviewer if you leave your reviews right now!"
10% About Pets.
30% about How good the MC is and why people should worship him.
30% about politics / trade.
30% Repeating information or speaking useless information.
The story is good and the steal function is great. Hopefully he won't turn into a degenerate and start stealing pan***s like a certain character. At some points the story extension seemed unnecessary; just to reach a certain word limit. It could be more concise and still be good in those parts.
Brothers...hear me far and wide, this was no accident, THIS IS SPA- Fate?
Para que vean lo lento que va esto, en el capítulo 56 solo paso un dia y de ahí al 64 solo va por las 2 de la tarde, osea está tardando mucho para hacer una mierda, encima el MC es un cachondo de mierda. Ve a una mujer y ya está saltando a ella. Se dejó manipular para casarse con una mujer y ella le dice que hacer y el sigue lo que le dicen
The mc is not one of the bois, nuff said.
In anycase, I find how independable the mc is annoying. I have a feeling the story will have a repetitive cycle of the mc being too confident, face slapping, then there is a hiccup where he is having a big disaster, and then magically it tides over.
I mean the fact is, he has not once concluded any sort of testing towarda his abilities. He just sort of hope it works. We havent seen him activily train his abilities either, especially since ita been said that the extent to which he has his abilities arent to the level of the original patient.
He is dumb, arrogant, and extremely lucky. Also he seema to be far more physically able than it makea sense. Like sneaking that piece of paper, how? I dont remember a patient that could do that, he most certainly doesn't have that type of skill. How bad of a secret agent are u if a total noob can do that? Horrible character design..
Ans the whole seducing the woman to get her on their side, seems like such a dumb way to get ppl to so things. U really think someone like her would abandon their ambition and work for some punk who only wants sex? Thats horrible world development and character development. Tf
I can also see him being blinded by lust. He is a hopeleas pervert. Like how vain do u have to be to seek satisfaction in the number of women u conquer. And obiously his superiority complex, that comes from wanting to steal other ppl's women. I can see his stealing a mans girl, and causing aome type of chaos for no reason. All bc he needs the satisfaction of being better than other men. Thats pretty vain and I dislike it. Its like that other book with the 10 keys, i can easilt see thia book degrade bc of the pervert quality.
Ik alot of my review is full of opinion. But thats what a review is, my opinion on a novel, and i think its not great.
Honeslty i think the novel is just baiting all the h.orny ppl into it.
such a nice story, I never knew I was missing something of this calibre. The work and details are so true. Also, I could see and feel the atmosphere that author tried to write in words...A read is definitely worth it.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
To be honest the only props I can give to this novel is the translation and language. Man this is boring as hell. Everything is just 'oohhh I am supposed to dieeee' 'a ghost is forcing me to get married to weird women' there is nothing interesting or intriguing here, I mean I would rather watch scooby do. Everything here is so reactive, no special props or anything for the MC, just the future powerup they're all preventing from happening. Can't say more, we need better novels
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