Talk about page turner! As someone has already said this is so beautifully written that you crave more with each chapter!The characters, even the side characters have their own lives and the author has done an excellent job at making them real. You can literally imagine how Ray will react to Xion's blunder or how Allen and Nazia will handle things. Darius, the ML is unpredictable! Like really unpredictable. You can't guess his thoughts other than that he is amused by our adorable bunny Xion!
I don't think I like this story, I love it! I keep getting butterflies in my stomach because of the characters ...this is sooo recommended
This book… truly, author, you’ve outdone yourself this time around. ✍️I’m genuinely lost for words.Seal of approval! (Chef's kiss) ?
there are two things I would like to say about this book, first those who don't read it are gay and second
I won't say anything that spoils the novel; however, I will tell you how great this novel is!The main character is amazing. Hischaracter development is astonishing. Hemight seem one way at first but he's like anonion. It takes time to get to know him. l liketo call him the Monarch. You'll see why whenyou read the novel. The other characters arecool as well. The author makes sure to taketime to develop the characters. He doesn'tdo it half-heartedly. The author makes sure toupload often which is amazing. I appreciateevery chapter he writes. This novel is trulyone of the greatest novels l've read and Ihope it does well. I wish I could more for thisnovel. The author deserves it! Alright I won'ttake any more of your time. I'm sure many ofyou probably stopped reading already. Butto the ones who read it fully, tell me what yourthoughts are. Do you feel the same?
Some of the best writing I've found on this site! The story progression is solid and so happy to see likable and believable characters. They all have their own personalities and not just bland female characters. I wish we had some character descriptions or more detailed descriptions of them all in the story but so far it's been fantastic.
Peak philosphy?? ye oil up the mc! Make em feel the grind and the pain, make it a fight through diamonds???u200d?? ye but reading it maybe fix the way you describe things, its kinda confusing and you reiterate the same idea too much, the first chap is barely recognizable from how long the paragraphs are, maybe add some plot points but if its just an auxiliarry chap it could work, but now since uts the first chap nothing is actually happening
A shameless five-star review from this author.Knowing how bad my debut was with this book, I have decided to write a redo of the book with not just what I want to write, but with what readers actually want to read. If You're a fan of insanely overpowered MCs who try to act weak in the eyes of the public, hide within secretive organizations, and create a group that rivals the world, then this is for you. Don't get me wrong though, this won't be a rip off of the eminence in shadows. There will be an actual show of the MC's growth in power, reasonable female leads, and a good cause for action throughout the story, Aka plot. It depends on what you look forward to, but know that this isn't a sm*t story, nor will I be writing shitty snu snu.If you're tired of the standard Harem genre, then do give this a try, I believe you would forget about the fact that it's even a harem once you get immersed in the story.
Writing quality 5 : well written Story Development 3 Character design 1: Mc is hyper dumb wimp... bro doesn't know who he is , what he wants , what he does ? World background 3: I am at 100 but I don't know enough about the world ? Good story but I feel like the author is not interested in doing this
Okay honestly,the opening,for me not really good.But as a reader,I kept on reading and unlocking the chapter.The story slowly go from meh to good.And i don't think i can stop now.i really want to know how this story will go.
I think it is a good book give it a read
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