I really like the main character, Mayar, his charisma, kindness, and leadership skills really do help in making the things that the boys accomplish not seem too unrealistic. I've also noticed that your writing has greatly improved since the beginning. It seems you've gained some confidence and have a clear end goal for the novel. The only thing I would suggest is giving the other characters more screen time because right now everything seems to revolve around Mayar. It makes liking the other characters difficult. Other than that one complaint, I am greatly enjoying the novel and hope for many more chapters!
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just straight up trash would explain why but some has already did
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No way it’s back let’s gooooooooooo my favourite novel
my first impression of this novel : "d*mn what kind of book is this? martial art gamer? how can that be !!! this must be a joke ! "after I read until latest chapter : " D*MN WHAT'S THE MEANING OF THIS ?!?! REALISE MORE CHAPTER !!! HURRY UP !!!! "
Started reading this months ago, read all of it and waited for more chapters to come out.Anyways the novel is really good, not very fast paced but not very slow either, kind of a relateable MC I suppose (personality) and the disciples is pretty unique.
It's good, I suppose. This is my first sign-in novel so I can't compare it with anyone but I like this idea of quietly living your days in seclusion and gaining considerable amount of strength over a period of time and then going out.I would have personally liked if the MC was someone like a rouge cultivator who travels all around the world signing in all kinds of places gaining skills and resources and becoming overpowered mercenary who likes living with nature, visiting iconic places around the world, going on epic adventures that takes him to all kinds of places.If anybody knows any similar novel like my above description please let me know about it.
its a pretty good story up until around chapter 100ish, though obbiously it has issues. primarily, its how casually the MC can grow in strength, but i enjoyed it cause i like overpowered MCs. however, around chapter 100 it seems to change to an entirely different story. The MC goes from being a body refiner (thus having a strong and muscular body) to being thin and lanky. he goes from being an extremely acomplished alchemist to being incapable of making a basic fasting pill. he goes from being able to make pill after pill easily to making a single pill exhausting him. read at your own peril, it was a waste of my coins
**sigh**, i really pity those that did not know this piece of art cause this is so awesome so author - sama please continue updating????