Bad editing, Full of error Dont recommend to invest in this novel
Truly spectacular. Not like anything I've seen before. Chapters are long, fights are detailed an enjoyable, most characters are realistic and fleshed out. 10/10 recommend.
After reading the first 20 chapters, I've gotten a good impression of the novel. Although it kinda reminds of another novel I read, I like the idea. Hope this one gets picked and gets updated!
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing. Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat. Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities. So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish. I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.
I am reviewing a few chapters in but .... well not but... its just awesome. It was funny, unique, brilliant... I don't know, you just name it. Just give the book a chance and you will continue right from the first chapter. It's great work you have here author!
The first chapter was good. It made me want more but sadly, that eas the only chapter. Good job!??
Quite the novel. Something I found rather pleasing was how well this novel is written. Not in the sense where every sentence is composed of complex vocabulary but because of how well everything is described. It's never boring as the author doesn't create entire paragraphs of details on small things to fill up the chapter with words. Along with that comes the occasional casual dialogue which gives off a sense of relaxation which makes the novel more enjoyable. Very good read!
I read the early chapters of this novel and immedietly drawn in. The premise if very promising as it explores human desires.It was beautifully written with several layers of mystery.But the cover got my attention.
Translator here: its a good story but mtl stops everyone from reading it . Hopefully I can make it slightly better. I am doing this for fun so expect there to be small changes at least ,for example, I could mostly remove the already little racists parts. For any suggestions comment
Truly enjoy the story so far. The grammar is good and there isn't any apparent plot holes. Hope more people will find this piece.
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I'm sorry, Mister Meng Fan, but I'm afraid your job application doesn't even remotely resemble the proper format. At a bare minimum, we would need it to include your highest level of schooling, references from previous employers, and absolutely no mention of your 'sick-ass skateboarding tricks'.
Oh, and next time you apply to Baskin Robbins? Don't title your resume My Extraordinary Achievements.
The story is quite interesting. the character is not useless to remain traumatized due to his ability but to use it correctly in a separate way.
Now I can only say that they should read the novel, it is quite interesting.