i interested in this story cuz of ring mc concept and romance tag and profile pic of the book.
i expected some good development between ring and the owner girl as they grow alongside eachothe.
but story stared to become boring after few chapters and still after 20 something chapter i don't get wat i wanted or expected like a good adventure and relationship
MC IS A WASTE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY
i hope you good luck for this story
I'm so impressed. This is indeed what is referred to as great imagination! The time you're taking or perhaps took to come up with such a plot deserves all the stars. so keep writing. I loved the book and I'm definitely in for the next chapters.
Just from the title alone, I was intrigued with this story, and the story itself does not disappoint! The characters and the microscopic world are wonderfully written, and the story itself is expertly woven as each chapter progresses! I'm almost caught up, and I can't wait to see how things go!
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i ussually domt do guns but this seems interesting and i think guns are only in the beggining levels or ranks.i just hope it updates again soon
After Reading The Story here is my review first of all The MC morale character is worst he's in engagement ceremony thinking about his Wife's Mother's body and other stuff and he's first time was a prostitute He's stupid I would say
And Some suggestions for author you can't write a good book with that short chapter like many people dropped because the chapter is 600 words or so and all of it was arrogant young master POV specially premium chapters it costs 3 coins like no free reader will use fast pass even if they use it it will not leave us a good feeling I suggest increase the word count or decrease the Release rate and Make a decent chapter with more words
Iam Still Gonna Give this story 5 because I liked it
I can accept that it makes no sense for a Navy SEAL to be working in the FBI for retirement money. I can accept that the MC doesn’t doubt the system which came out of no where even a little. I can accept the inaccurate descriptions of the USA and the sterotypical misogynistic depiction of female characters in the few chapters that I have read. I can accept using catties over kilograms and using weight to measure the amount of money in a bag. But live-streaming an FBI “drill” and turning a bank robber into a celebrity? What the f***. Mtling is one thing but this plot is like something out of a middle school kid’s imagination, completely unrealistic and full of holes. Even for a fictional story this is just too much. I would actually like to give this a one star review, but since it’s at least readable in English and it’s a trial read, I won’t t give a one star to the translation and release rate categories.
It's a cool story based on an even cooler premise. However, if you came here expecting a story similar Food Wars... I'm 120 chapters in and so far you can find more cooking done in a meth lab. If you can overlook the cooking part, the story itself is nice. The characters are interesting and the story is progressing. Worth a read.
The title caught my interest but I'm left disappointed. Thought that the emperor was living within his soul kinda like an old grandpa guiding him through it. Although It isnt bad with all the rage of pets, system check-ins, getting an angel/fallen from a system in an apocalypse. Getting alchemy mc's are nice as well but have a go and see what you think. ??
i read 200 chapters on mtl novel and i can say i like it and if you like "top Tier air-luck quitly practiced for tousands of years" than you will like it too since both follow a low-key MC. If you hate it then you wont like this Book aswell.Although there are a lot of similarities in the Premise (hiding strengh etc.) there are enough Story Differenzes that it dont feels like a Copy and as a "unique" Book that i can enjoy it. (Same Concept but different execution)In conclossion a fun read for Fans who like low-key Charakters with a fun Story , but Nothing wordshattering either.
I love it, the plot, the interactions, and the comedy are all much better than most of what webnovel has. ???????????????????