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Have you really looked past the first few chapters? the quality of translation drops more and more after the first few chapter. I am now at chapter 20 and it is putting me off to continue due the lack of the right translation. It feels like the translator does'nt check his work. I do hope it will become better. I will try to push through for now and keep reading
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Fantastic story so far. Is the story dropped or on break??????????
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
This story actually has the potential of becoming a popular read If the author could just find time to fix the grammatical errors and add more action or something along those lines.All in all, it's a good book. Already added it to my library.Looking forward to more improvement ?
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this book is like if you took Library of heavens path, turned it into a system version, gang-banged only I level up with Lin fan's confidence, but without as many insults.
Decent start but later on it just became horrible, like how cliche is it for a 2 year old baby to be able to kill two ***** men? Overall just a mash up of cliche plots riddled with inconsistency’s.
I agree its a great story and not nearly as badly translated as most of babel novels stuff is which is where this story comes from but there are more then 500 chapters at novelhall.com while there arnt even 100 here
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You are way too good at this man. Legit you’re ****ting out bangers left and right. Let’s hope it’ll be good.
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