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Would rate it five, but since this is just a rough draft--I'll give it a four. Point-of-views is confusing but, yeah... It can be fix over time... Haven't read all of the chapter. But I'll work on it.
Mmm.Personally, I don't think this is a great novel.I don't like the personality of the protagonist, he's a liiiittle bit... how do I say this. He sounds like he's written by an author who isn't really socially adjusted. Reading the first few chapters, it definitely seems like the case. A cashier won't ignore you just because you're a country bumpkin or a nerd, they may just be having a bad day, or they aren't big on customer service. And I don't know a single person who thinks it's loser-ish to spend a day watching movies, as not everyone is a party-holic. What I'm trying to say is, the protagonist is way too thin-skinned, and has too much of an inferior complex. The characters thus don't feel too realistic. It tries to insert a comedic undertone, but the humor's just kind of flat. I just really don't know anyone who finds quirky comebacks that are inserted everywhere, funny. Also, the writing style is very *******. Too much "!!!" and ALL CAPS, among other things. Emphasis is done in all the wrong ways. If you want to emphasize a character's emotions, pour everything into descriptive adjectives.It's not completely bad, compared to some of the fanfictions on this site, along with some of the female protagonist romance novels, but you can't say it's good either, especially since there are actually some really good works on this site.Overall: 3.4 starsWriting Quality: 3 starsStability of Updates: 5 starsStory Development: 3 starsCharacter Design: 2 starsWorld Background: 4 stars
OK - first let me start by saying that I love sci-fi novels (and that I think this novel is a gem, and deserves more credit than it's getting). I also happen to love fantasy novels. But what I really, really love are novels that manage to blend these two genres together creating an entertaining, well-written, action-packed, science <3's magic, totally amazing story.And that, my friends, is exactly what this author puts out. The characters are interesting, little to no grammatical errors, not to mention a sometimes hilarious, sometimes action/gritty, holistically amusing story-line! And as a bonus feature, the author seems to have a background in science and combat?? Regardless, the author sprinkles cool sounding combat and science-techno jargon throughout the story; while I'm not sure any of it's correct, it sounds frickin' awesome. Keep the good work, dear author, and I'll keep reading!
The Synopsis lied. The Mc is the dumbest human imaginable and extremely hateable. The writing quality and world building are good and a story with a plot such as this are wasted on its unlikeable idiot charcters. The Mc especially.
what a great read..GIVE US MOOOOOORRRREEEEE????????????????????????????????????????????????
This story is wonderful!! First I thought maybe it was like the rest of the novels.Loving this novel so far. It's not your typical novel that immediately gives you all the answers and the background. Bit by bit, you get to find out what happens and tie it to previous chapters and realize that there's a lot more to the plot.
I have read all the way up to chap 36 so far. I am having a hard time finishing the book.The morgiana girl seems to be shaping up to be the love interest so far. It does seem way too early to commit to someone unless the character will grow later and be with someone else but I doubt it with the way the author is writing him up. For a thirty year old person he does act like a kid (even the excuse of staying in character is a little bit exxagerated). One of the main reason people read reincarnation/rebirth novels is to have an MC that acts maturely and does not get flustered when he see a beautiful woman everytime...like seriously there was Victoria's Secret models on earth, why is he getting shocked all the time.As for character design it is very vague, I don't know if the author doesn't know how to write character description or just women's description. But they are all beautiful and the only thing I know is their beauty ranking. Honestly if you have a hard time writing description, as the MC is from earth you can use famous people to describe them to help us picture them.Another weird thing, that huang jin or yin guy asked morgiana to be his concubine but his wife refused to give herself to another man (why the double standard? Is the wife ok for him taking multiple women ...is a woman recognized as the top beauty in a city, a genius cultivator OK with sharing her man? Unless there is some type of abuse going on either mental or physical I really don't see something like that going on. Even more in a world where power is everything, no matter how much power the man is, the more established a woman is the less she can compromise.There is a reason why rich men statistically don't marry rich, powerful, independent women. There is usually a disconnect. "power couples" is usually in the realm of fantasy, there is always a give and take in relationship even in so called power couple in real life.I will try to read more chapters and update later my review if I see some improvements as usually people get better as they write.It seems it is not a harem novel from an author comment I read. Which is pretty good. But just because it is not harem story doesn't mean author you should scare away from exploring relationship and growth. People change, and someone you liked at 15 may not be the right person at 40 or 30 when you know yourself more or just life happens. I mean the high divorce rate nowadays that divorce is no longer taboo is a good proof of that.So far the most fun and interesting love interest I have in asian novels here is the one from Swallowed star where the girl was obese and the MC still fell in love with her ( yes she lost weight but that was after the MC reciprocated her feelings).
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Why it's the same as Hollywood. Re:coded novel on this site¿ ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Definitely not the same kind of the whole hoard of system stories that seemed to plague the site.The characters are decent, the plot is interesting, and the character's development is okay. It's a bit cringe at times, but it's really good overall.The first and second arc of the book is in Amazon, and as someone who had read it both in this site and bought the book, I can say it's worth my money.
A five stars novel that does not suit my tastes. It's a shame, but these kinds of stories are just not my type. I've read the first 20+ chapters, and all I can say is that this would actually be something I would patiently wait for and even spend a couple of spirit stones. The grammar, the pacing, the characters, everything seemed to be in place, nothing too unrealistic while still pitching into the fantasy realms. I've read a few other stories in the same genre, but their main characters would always have inconsistent reactions. Now, I'm not saying that this story is devoid of mistakes, but it is indeed a gem for a web novel's calibre. It is just that the genre is not to my tastes, so I would probably be dropping this. The author is a meticulous person that spends actual time looking through others' books with detail, kudos to them.Now... I shall withdraw myself to the realms of QT and High Fantasy stories... Farewell (ㆁωㆁ)