its a neat concept but is kinda bigoted and racist .........................................................................................
The unique idea with the great world building easily caught my attention and I hope that reader would be hooked as they read the opening chapters.Doing great job authorGoodluck
THIS DESERVES SO MUCH MORE ATTENTION!!!!! I´m looking forward to all the things that happen in the future and how this novel develops! It has potential!! Huge recommendation!
chapter are wayy to short, author you need more pump more brain power and increase the pages inside chapter and you need keep minimum pages in each chapter constant not like 4 then 6 or 7 then 9, I would recommend atleast 12 - 30 pages in each chapters, set the minimum each chapter 12 - 10 pages, it bring reader more joy when they see that novel can last longer etc, plus if by any you don't increase pages it's not worth paying or use ticket to read chapter, when just read from anthor website (piracy) etc. plus I enjoy reading this novel but I hate or get disappointed when I see read chapter like rocket.
I'm in love with this book. I need more. The plot was great, I can't stop reading, and this book has so much potential the way it was set up. Please if not a mass release at least a chapter a week or preferably a day or two.
I just loved the idea behind it, the concept was intriguing and the main character was well written, of course, there are places where it can grow, can't wait to see where this goes.
This book blatantly steals chapters from other books the first three are all from different books, I mean the second is word for word the same as another book. This author is a thief and nobody should read this book!
This is a great book, but it needs more chapters. Other than that though, it is on of the best books I have read in a while. Please update it!
I'm on chapter 3, and boy is this story doing a number on me. I normally don't read stories involving systems, but this one caught my attention and interest. I like the character and how it started. The descriptions and the characters feel real. The world is very well constructed, you deserve five stars for that! And your stability of updates, you gotta teach me how to update like that man! My only complaint is, the grammar and the punctuation. It's good but it can always be better. And be sure to capitalize the start of every line!
the best league of legends novel, it covers the entire world of lol, it has very good interactions with the team, a very clear purpose, the fights are good and a very well done structure, romance, I give it 9/10 because I still don't know term
Oi guys it's back and better(?) than before!Lelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelolelol
around ch 30 its obvious that it was translated by google translate or some other machine. i couldnt even tell ehat was going on