The story is Kind of meh. Grammar and Vocabulary need work.
The Characters are kind of stagnant, not sure about this part, sometimes the story is good.
It is okay overall but not that good but
Would rate it higher but, so few chapters. I am not a hard person to please, but I admit that the last few months Webnovel has put out out some good stuff! This story moves fast but it seems the MC’s system lives to push out rewards and the cultivation system seems off. He gets a thousand years of cultivation but doesn’t go to the next realm! It is off and awkward but he does seem to be smart and only arrogant in situations he can control. Looking forward to how he actually interacts with the side charecters from his family! Worth the time and the read! Hopefully this gets picked.
The book is quite acceptable, however I will give the author a couple of recommendations...
Give more prominence to the mc... The author makes a mistake that all authors of books make. and that is to give much prominence to a secondary pj is very boring to read several chapters of secondary characters and then a few of Mc... I'm not saying that I don't mind a couple of chapters telling the history of the world. The protagonist's past. Or one or another event in the world. However from my opinion that kind of chapters should not exceed the amount of (4), the perfect synchrony would be several chapters of the (Mc) And between 1 and 4 chapters of the past, secondary Pj, events in the world...
This is my opinion. The book has a lot of potential simply is to give more prominence to the Mc. Read 10 chapters where there is no progress of the mc is totally boring ...
PsdT: English is not my first language so excuse the spelling mistakes.
So realistic world. I mean this story was never found anywhere and finally i can found it in here. This is typical story what i looking for, no harem and no overpower MC. Good job[img=recommend]
Deserves a five star no doubt
#plsaddromance
#plsnoharem
It's actually a Chinese novel that makes sense. You will know when you read it, but this isn't bad it's definitely one of the better football novels in this platform
So I'll giving you some review....
I saw your post in the forum.
I didn't actually read your novel,
Because firstly I'm not a fan of a novel like this but I really thought that you are a good writer...
Good luck to your novel
I can’t understand why people are praising this novel as something worth to read. I don’t know if it’s because the translation is just bad but most of the dialogues are too stupid. The behaviors of the characters are not something someone with a normal brain would do.
The premise of the story is something I quite liked. Ofc there were some minor grammar error but those can be overlooked. The pacing and the way different perspective were written were fast and weird. Scenarios were shifting around rapidly without much context. But overall I really liked it quite a lot. Would love a bigger worldbuilding but it a short novel read and I enjoyed it really much.
那些突然消失的同学 by 路书一阁Could be a potentially top tier horror story, will update review after reading raws.