Almost every arc's so good that is gives me goosebumps and great level of amusement just by reading few chapters totally recommended ??
great Novel I recomend reading it, its literally funny and it would just make you laugh so much.... btw i tried the technique and damm it work, i got myself a date with an asian girl and i will literally do everything that i need to do to make this hot asian girl to be interested in me
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The writing is sometimes confusing but other than that the novel is good
My favorite spin of the genre
My favorite spin of the genre
My favorite spin of the genre
My favorite spin of the genre
My favorite spin of the genre
Very enjoyable thus far, been one of the better Verizon's of this concept imo,......................looking forward to new chapters hopefully
The plot is unique. The new ideas and concepts are refreshing to read
Thank you all for your kind words. This is a story that needs the reader's help to advance. This means, make choices for more chapters. Show your support this way.
I'm the author so I would shamelessly give it a five star review. And the start may be a little messy which is common in my works but please do give it a chance and read further.
there's not much depth in pretty much all of the story. everything happens so quickly with minimal dialog or even the main characters thoughts. one second he is fighting in class and one sentence later without any explanation or expanding on what happened or other people's thoughts the class is just over. I can understand time skipping over his first fifteen years even if I felt that his parents weren't really explained at all or his thoughts on the situation cuz it can be explained later but to the whole time he is in the academy the story just feels rushed. it's like "he arrives at school. he meets a friend. he arrives in class." obviously it's not that ridiculous but that's what it feels like.
I felt the longing and the message of the novel was delivered smoothly to me. Every word hits different and it's so deep. It moves my heart in agony. For the technicalities, separate some paragraphs and don't miss the punctuations. Great start author!
Okay for new readers, here's my message for you, 'read at least 5 chapters before you decide to drop it'.
This story is based on emotions, the inner world of a person, he might be a prodigy of music for others but within himself. it is his journey towards his future as he comes to term with his present and maybe his past in later chapters.
I liked what I read, this is not your fast food style novel, rather you need to sit down & invest yourself to enjoy it.