I really enjoy reading about the deeper emotions and relationship developing between the two of them. I can't wait to read more. I look forward to seeing how their relationship grows.
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A good book. Every time I read it, the few chapters that there are get better and better. Very good character development although, his powers could be cooler. But there's only 19 chapters. It's getting there! Look forward to seeing more
an enjoiable story althoug a Little short
The book is a nice slow read. I would recommend it if you have some free time and nothing else to do or you're interested in seeing things from the perspective of the infinitely powerful.
It's fine. I hope someone writes a story with a similar concept, but in a fantasy world filled with magical elements. This is basically just a historical novel. The MC ended up in a certain period, he's a history buff, he knows what's going to happen next, and talks about it with the king and his subordinates. For example, traveling back to ancient Rome and talking with Caesar, fixing his mistakes. Obviously there's no Caesar nor Rome here, but that's essentially what the novel is. It's a cool premise but it doesn't suit my personal preference as its just normal humans with our normal politics. There's no real plot.
I dropped this novel, the story have a good premise, but the way the author writhes makes me puke blood. The POV change so much that i want to punch the screen and with the number of flashbacks combined you could write another book. Every chapter there is a change is the pov that totaly breaks the flow of the story. The protagonist is the self-image of every tenage shonen manga protagonist and his sister is anoying as well. Good luck with the novel and hope you improve your skills ?
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Bruhhhhhhh really?This is just getting overboard at this point.Makes me wonder if webnovel has been abandoned. Sheesh, is you are just gonna copy a finished novel and pass it off as a new one than what's the point.And here I was thinking webnovel actually got something readable for once.
i read till 250 chapter sofirst if u are looking for a beast Taming novel were mc goes on adventures and have beast fights then u r would be greatly disappointed what u would find here in this novel is what you see in urban novels -fightingthis novel is all about mc basically making connections with people at one lvl then on another and so on while enhancing his beasts then repeat this novel very bland after a 100 or chapters and becomes boring so for people who like normal beast Taming novels this definitely a let downbut this not the worst novel of beast Taming novels but a quite a different take on it just the author forgot the basic charm of the Beast Taming theme in his goal of making a different onei hope it made some sense
I liked it, I just came here after reading it's name,Was not expecting much, but it's quite good,It's Author's first Novel and I can say after reading that he has done quite a good work.I wish it will be more good later on.
This novel is still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.