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Just started reading and will give it a try.
I’m waiting for more chapters to give my honest review but love the idea so continue
Goooddddddd. Ooonnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Just a grown up man acting like a nine year old kid. Not my cup of tea.
This is an avalanche of characters and stories.All in a good way! go fall in love with one or many of them!
The novel is just not for me Mc is too nice and chummy with the real protagonist ( he doesn’t have to antagonize him but I would’ve prefer if he ignored him )Also i think endric is the new bff of the princess, and he has to have feelings from the past Alex but he shows no jealousy or anything(endric gf should also show jealousy, why she letting him get close to another girl)
wasted potential, could hav3 b33n good but author wasted not only my time, their own time but everyone else's time
really enjoy the story have read a single chapter that feels like filler and has a great balance between action and development with great pacing
这是一本好书，这是一本很棒的书，我喜欢你的小说，永远不要停止写作，作者你是最好的书
I have rarely been this dissatisfied with a book. It’s hard to decide where to even begin because every element feels like a complete mess. The world-building? Nonexistent. The author seems to have cobbled together ideas and characters blatantly borrowed from games, movies, and other stories without any effort to create something original. There’s no cohesive world, no sense of immersion, and certainly no thought put into how anything fits together.The basic laws of physics? Completely ignored. Everything is exaggerated to an absurd degree, and not in a fun or imaginative way—just nonsensical. The power system is equally horrendous, lacking any sort of structure, logic, or creativity. It feels like the author just threw random powers at characters without a thought to balance or depth.The plot is an utter disaster, with no clear direction or purpose. Events seem to happen arbitrarily, and the pacing is all over the place. There’s no tension, no stakes, and no reason to care about what’s going on. And don’t even get me started on the character development. The characters are flat, one-dimensional, and painfully juvenile. They lack any sort of growth or complexity, making it impossible to connect with them.Speaking of juvenile, the writing style is so childish it feels like it was written by an 8-year-old. There’s no sense of maturity, nuance, or sophistication. It’s filled with cringeworthy dialogue and overly simplistic descriptions that fail to evoke any emotion or imagery.Overall, this book is an exercise in frustration. It’s immature, unoriginal, and utterly devoid of anything resembling quality storytelling. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone, not even as a guilty pleasure. Save your time and energy for something worthwhile.
It's ok but you should try to elaborate even more about the story and characters and all the best