Gopinath_Naik
Well written world setting. The author had taken care to ensure that every character has a proper introduction.Reminds one of their school/college days. A great read!
Wow, this is such a good find. Good thing I came across of this novel. It was really fun. I want all my friends to read this.
In short, it was a fair read. Might need to improve on the dialogues as they sounded a bit inorganic. Additionally, some sentences can be rearranged to make them flow more smoothly.Overall, the story has potential, just needs some minor adjustments. So, thank you for your hard work, author.
Love the story and all the characters thanks for updating their story!
DAAMMMNNN!!! THIS BOOK IS FIREE !!!!!!!To be honest, I have always been Kiiara's big fan. Her writing is unique and rare. It's not always when you can feel the characters' emotions. In her books, the characters feel alive, like humans, and their feelings are real. It's quite easy to visualize the scenes too - it makes it so much better. I love the angst trope...and love the character development. The female lead is SAVAGE... Oh lord, it's not every day when your ML and FL clash against each other. And also Oliver, my boy, he's soo fine <3_<3I love this book. It's such a catch and I can see so much potential in this. Keep writing more, Ki <3 ^_^The world needs more of your writing!! Ps: It doesn't feel like it's been 3 years since you took a break from writing!! Your writing is still as beautiful as ever or much more, I would say. Welcome back, Ki <3
I'm sure your numbers good and all but can anybody tell me where I can find a real apocalypse story where MC isn't some dumb transmigrator and knows what's going on or becomes overly overpowered in a short time
Great story, the protagonist is interesting and the work does not have such a one-dimensional view of the league's players, showing much more of them than their stereotype, which is something rare to see in general.Interesting system and not so stolen, at least initially, although I predict it will stay, looking forward to more chapters.
I bet this will end like the boys at some point, like all the heroes are evil and only care about money and fame, zik is cool deku. His not too cringy but with the same hype ?????? super star in the making
Review for fo. Not sure this is related to apocalypse month though
a beginning that just makes you want more.it won't be a good idea to skip this book without giving it a good try.
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Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.
