Exact same plot as hikaru no go with a few tweaks to make it seem as though it's not an almost out right copy from the fact that old geezers play a virtual reality game more than kids.
Fun and exciting read with an equally fun and exciting protagonist. Zack is entertaining at times as well as being a badass. He's also different in character, and his role within the story is vastly different from what I often see in novels around Webnovel. I appreciate the balance between the text that shows game elements and the story paragraphs. Everything is easy to read. I have yet to see more about the world, but I think there would be more to show in the future. Looking forward to more chapters.
If you are a fan of the classic wuxia novels from Jin Yong then this will seem like a walk down nostalgia lane. Theres just enough twists to the original story to keep you guessing.
the story has a strong grip on its character and clear plot, two strong base to make a good story.characters are fun to be around with. like RIN TIN TIN, i want to see how she further would take the matter. and poor MC hope he gain the power enough to rule. best of luck author
I am LordMouse and I approve of this book And because my word count is not enough I will allow you puny mortals to bask in the majesty and grandeur of the great LordMouse
This story feel like i am skipping too many thing..........???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
4.4Very high potential.Translation is iffy at times.Hopefully, more updates.Story isn’t school BS or 1v1 background duels, arrogant bxstards aren’t trying to kill in public as pro assasins used, while dudes robbing and tryin to survive.Characters can reason and negotiate without holding death grudges. Have their backgrounds shape their personality but not define it.World is good.
This is great! Sect building with a bunch of nice brats it’s very good slice of life stuff.. plus there’s a cute little fox ?
Wow. I was surprised. This novel really help my understanding on my cultivation.I will be braeking through another level.Praise this mortal authors insight and genius.Hope my immortal brothers read this
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Bro the title of your story and the synopsis didn't do your story justice. I will be honest I was not very excited about reading a story about a kid sharing head space with a CIA Agent. I didn't know where you were going with this nor the fact that you would combine the two souls together to make a better whole. If I knew your story was anything like Jay Aslan I would have been more excited about reading it. I am ecstatic that I took a chance with your story and kind of angry that you didn't make you synopsis better lol. I could have missed a gem because of that. That all said thank you for a great story and I hope you keep up the good work.