Have read till chapter 14, found no grammatical errors, story seems going in the right direction, the pacing is just right and honestly I can't point out any flaw in this story till chapter 14. I hope you maintain this quality and publish more chapters, I need more of them.
Why does it say that this story is completed? They author suddenly stopped writing which is fine since I thought he's taking a break but now it seems he's dropping it? That sucks since I liked the universe and the characters! The plot isn't half bad either! Author plz continue!
Love this story, am always looking for a good (non-human/monster protagonists - that still are human mentally) and this one is really great.the evolution system is cool and made me laugh out very loudly at times with the "ant"ics of the protagonist when it is applied.definently worth dedicating your F5 finger to.
story is good I like it just mc is little bit too cowardly but everything is OK but I don't know whether this novel is dropped or no so if author if you are reading this just reply it I kinda liked it to read so peace???
useless novelcliche like many others past few weeks I've been getting all crap novels can you just start putting the older books up again that didn't get accepted rathe then these books full of cliche
A good and refreshing story about a Moron/Naive in a cultivation story The MC have only his detection of lie and with that he want to reach a greater strength and it's the difference between this and other cultivation story not scheming or false "good MC" .The MC in this story is naive and that will create some new opportunities and other difficulty that don't have other MC for example :If he want something he tell it ,unlike other cultivation story ,that don't revelate anything because of the sensibility of the information
The story developments is very interesting and keeps the reader intrigued and interested. In addition, the stability of updates is excellent. The writing quality is also good but the author needs to make it longer so the reader doesn't get too impatient.
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HOLY SH*T..!! Did this really came to webnovel...!!?? ☆*:.｡.o(≧▽≦)o.｡.:*☆ I'm lucky... ? ? I love this novel very much.. Thanks for coming all the way here.. ? I'm looking forward to read it one more time.. (✧ω✧)
I have been reading this novel in whitemoonx blacksun translations. Is this being translated by the same group??? Because the translation is still going on in the other site while it is going at a snails please p and pace in this one.
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Really good. One of the best I've read on this app in a while. Great world and story development. Would recommend. I'm glad to be one of the first to read it . Keep going! And to fulfill the character requirementCOUNTRY ROADSTAKE ME HO-