I have no idea how this has 4 stars. The writing quality (style, grammar) etc. is poor and the MC and all the other characters are just retarded.
Dramatically there sometimes when the wruter refers males as she and females as he but that is very minor. Apart from that this is amazing. when i started reading it I thought it will be like any normal Overpowered MC all cliches but this story has strong plot armour,character development and great ideas. Being a system type novel the whole concept is different. Probably comes in my top 3 of the novels I have read on this platform. I love your work man keep at it, because I know it is hard to keep an Overpowered Mc with a system as interesting as you did. Amazing I used all my power stones on you man, keep at it.
No harem, so pack your bags boys. Everyone else can stay, I guess...The world is certainly alive and all nice, the characters play nicely alone, and no one doesn't exist for the reason of convenience, except one girl. The world-building in this is extensive and although no army building has been seen yet, Chapter 30, I feel like if this done correctly, I'll keep reading this book. Btw not really OP MC since he gets yeeted out of existence before chapter 30. I hope we see Orks cuz green is da best and da strongest!
even if u start changing the story at chapter 100 there is still 100 chapters that completely copied from the original no one is gonna w8 for u to copy and paste 100 chapters till u decide to change the story
This novel is simply terrible. Plot holes are everywhere, MC is dull, and every character is arrogant. Don’t waste your time here. It isn’t worth it.
I really thought the plot was good, I really think there was much more need for character delolpmnet though because of the fact there were to many characters but overall the book was very intriguing
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I loved this novel in all it's entirety but he just stopped updating his novel no warning and i have been checking in for like 5 months NOTHING absolutely nothing it's making me sad for me to see my most favorite novel just stop like this and i am heart broken and hope to see one day this up and running again but for me you have lost a watcher. i may come back but i am unable to see that there are no more chapters it's crushing my dreams LITERALLY i have had no dreams sense this stopped :( i hope to see this one day i may come back but not anytime soon
Ok,I’m very excited for this.
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Damn the book keeps getting better and better, Its just the perfect balance between different genres and the grammar and battle scenes also keep improving, The author is one my favourites.Hope for more chaps.
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