Really well written story and a unique world building.
Its like a futuristic cyberpunk but with mysterious powers in the blend.
That said, the scenes of carnage are just described using a few words. It can be expanded upon to make people feel the impact. And the paragraphing should be done properly..shorter paragraphs would be easier to read and floow.
Keep up the great work
They seem to be trying to plagiar ism/ Steal the work done on mtk nation. universal creation start a god sinulator which is a common low in webnovel
I Stopped reading this is where the mc is op but he is thinking that he is weak and the others cultivator thinks that he is an otherworldly expert living a mortal life type novel which i got bored of so no thank you
release more chaps now..................
A bit of a missed opportunity with theis one. Read 30 chapters, way too little progress and way too much time spent with the gf.
Great book , hope author continues with it , the novel is very interesting and has a good introduction for characters. As I am a new author , I can learn from others and their different writing styles which is very good by the way
I will give a review. The story is pretty good. it's good to burn time. not too good but not too bad ... 8/10 ....sosjsbsisbsjsizbjxixbxbxizbaiaba
This is the sake for the 3-year badge so I don't have anything to say to me. But I hope that the person who is reading this will try and read my novel. I know that it isn't that good but please read it and rate it for me so that I can improve.
I love the premise of the story!
Chapters can still improve after a round of edit. I suggest you do that once you've reached chapter 10. Keep up the good work and best wishes to you and to our little John in the story.
Also, I would appreciate it if you can drop a review of my novel too—The Last Dragon Hunter. Thanks in advance!
Who ever wrote this is acting a bit i di otic
I never seen such messed up writing and story logic and bull sh it names even if other authors themselfs tried to do bad writing they couldn't do it this bad
.......... JUST HOW HOW CAN IT BE THIS BAD IT IS LIKE STORY ITSELF IS TRYING TO SUICIDE MY GOOD WHAT A ABOMINATION OF WRITING!!!!!!!!
Hello, Author here you might already notice I rated myself pretty poorly for writing quality and updates for the chapters. This is because I still am a high school student. Obviously, my grammar will not be top-notch. I will try my best to fix these errors, however, there is a limit to how well I will do. I'm working on getting an editor so hopefully the writing quality will improve, but for now, if you hate grammar mistakes then I don't recommend you read this story. And of course, during the school year, my chapters rate might be pretty inconsistent. Oh, and those of you worried that I might include some weird teenage fantasies don't worry I will keep that in check (;
I really like student learning systems and this really hit the spot, good novel.