I like the way the story has developed even after reading for a klong time. The writer's point of view is interesting .
While the writing quality is a bit down since there are a lot of grammar errors, but overall this is a story which is worth reading
Bruh .I forced myself to keep reading based on 'MC will get better ' and ' story will get better . How much more torture do i have to endure, how many more braincells do i have to sacrifice before this actually gets better???!!!
well... the story itself is not bad.. but for a teacher, he spent a pitifully short period of time at school
Just the title of the book got me all excited! I really adore the separate pov's. The characters are so strong and influencing. Keep up the good work!!
You really have a good story backgroud, but its a shame that you can't develop your story well.
As far as ch 81, you keep dumping "information". I think this kind of writting style is way too boring. No real development of story, just excessive amount of information. Even if you skip the "history" or some "information" it wouldn't affect the other stories, so until ch 81, i just read 2-3 page, and skimming the other excessive BS.
The concept of the novel was good till the MC transformed into a total Little Pony Naive Simp, the Dungeon was a dungeon for the first 5chaps and then turned into a typical employee slave... This was a total disappointment, and for the great top of the crop, the novel is already being dropped little by little. Don't waste your time here, the Author took a very easy and good concept (dungeon maker, dungeon core being) and ruined it in just 20 chaps.
The first thing to say would be the unique way of author's writing as this is the first time I read a story written in such a way. And honestly, it is good. Just POV and the third-person perspective confused me at first but then it became clear. Keep it up.
This novel is good. Very recomended. The story about game RPG. Exciting. And, the novel is complete so you can read anytime and continous. Oh my god, when 140 character ia finish
This is a renewed review where I will give you guys the pros and cons according to what I believe. See if it fits your taste before giving it a try, even though I hope that you will like it.
Pros:
1) I review most chapters countless times, to make sure that the grammar is adequate and the details and describing of the scenes is detailed enough
2) Everything, including the reincarnation isn't random, but there is a bigger plot behind them (which you can find when you reach around chapter 54-56
3) MC isn't a simp. There is romance in the story, and it starts around chapter 150, but it isn't the type of <
4) I could list some more things, but I realize that they would spoil part of the story, so I'm leaving the rest for you guys.
Now, here are the cons
1) There are some cliche scenes like a pre-arranged fiance, but there is a bigger plot behind them as well.
2) The MC was an orphan before his reincarnation, and his character grows throughout the story.
3) The only thing that I haven't decided yet on the story is the harem. I want to have a harem but everything must be natural and there have to be feelings involved. At the same time, I haven't decided if there will be 2-3 women or 8-9. This is something that I will discover along with you guys as we progress through the story.
Aside from everything listed above, I just want you to enjoy the story.
It's a wish fulfilment novel. Idk if it's with the translators or what but I can't bear to read it for too long. my brain cells can't accept this level of stroke. If this ever get picked, please fix it.
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An interesting book, but sometimes incomprehensible, what the author wanted to say by some kind of action. The characters are written well, but the world as a whole is incomprehensible, and there is no clearly expressed plot.