Elkadion did fuck up a lot of shit in orange zone damn
Author here, please let me know if you would like to add anything to the novel. Also, let me know how you find the pacing of the novel.
Thanks
what chapter does he find his wife? if anyone knows please tell me
They're still deleting reveiws. I'm gonna rate it 5 star this time and see if my comment gets deleted again. I reccomend you guys to go read Chestnuts translation instead of this trash. The translator has a hard time conveying things in proper English.
A stupid novel.
1: HAREM (nonsensical harem with girls flocking to him)
2: getting what he needs at the moment from random chest rewards.
3: forced plot armors even though there was no need for them.
4: forced fortuitous moments like finding a rare plant that just happened to mature when MC is there.
5: Some people just having the talent/skills to heal or boost MC at critical moments when there was no mention of those skills before.
It could have been a good novel, but author did not put in any effort.
How TF did this get picked over all the other decent ones in the trial? F**k you, Webnovel. Just f**k you.
Absolutely no quality standard whatsoever.
Just my cup tea. Awesome
This is by far the best cultivation novel you can find. I can safely say that i have read almost all cultivation novels worth speaking about and this is miles ahead of them all. Save me some cake!
Captivating. Haven't read anything that could get me this excited before. The author seems to have quite a bit of knowledge on gaming and uses it to make this interesting while at the same time drawing a line between reality and games. The fact that Liu's relationship with his sister is awkward and difficult for him shows that skills in games doesn't always count for real life interactions.
Reading this made me itch to play PUBG now.
But I suck at it.
Unlike most Xianxia novel this one has a slow and steady pace, that is very good, building a good establishment to the story, is very important, it would be better if the author is more accurate and detailed in explaining about his coming forth characters, and also explains the MC's surrounding more better, but the story is the best among the ones I've read.
Do not drop this author...
The *** scenes are good, but the characters and plot are poor. The story could be better. Also an exact explanation of why the main character was chosen. But you can guess why she was chosen.
Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.