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So far the story is really enjoyable, but I feel like at the beginning it was too fast-paced. Everything felt a little rushed. But other than that it's a good read.
nice for a beginner workI sense talent and potential from this although has a few gaps or issues here and there it doesn't spoil the reading experience
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Wtf. Why is this novel here again?
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hello viola when i can see new chapter
i cannot wait anymore because i love read your novel for full my days
your storyline in all chapter so interesting and perfect
Man my favourite novel Fan-fic so 5 starts. I still hasn't start reading it. It was just found this In new release ranking.......................................................
EXP ("Let me give you a debuff!"
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Why do translators still want to translate this type of novel? I mean, there are many of these novels on Webnovel, but they continue to translate the same genre of novels. Believe me, readers are fed up with novels of the same type constantly.
Very Very nice. The writing quality is awesome, Updates are regular, about once or twice per day usually. Love the story and the plot line. Plot is slowly raveling. The characters are engaging and interesting. Also, The world background is nice. I'd like the story expanded on and improved. Overall, pretty good stuff with a nice "plot".
shameless review! Join Dave on his journey to rescue the girls trapped as side characters and bring them into the folds of reborn to play the game!
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It's really good, you should read it
