I've read until the 50+ chapters and it keep me on the beat, after the explaining phase on early chapters the rest run smoothly, making more each chapters interesting and exciting ?This is what I felt after reading until Chapter 56:✍Writing quality: The writing quality is good. No glaring grammatical errors or typos. Its too few if it does have any mistakes.⏰Updating stability: the author updates one chapter daily ❤?Story development: the story is optimally paced. The two MCs are still kids but very OP.the story revolves around their brotherhood.... which I really like. I like it when stories don't include romance or anything alike. Action and adventure are great here.?World Background: At first i thought that the world herewould be simple and straight but its not. There's vast number of powers and races involved in this story but it won't give you confusion or information overload. d author explains well the complexity of its world.?u200d♀️Character Design: I love the way author created the averaging 14 years old kids here. i love their mischievousness and sudden coldness when in times of battle and they are too adorable in happy times. ?in short, this work is a gem! ? ? ?
This is a great story that should deserve 5 stars. The issue with it is that the chapters seem to get shorter and shorter but cost the same. It feels like a money grab. Most authors use the authors note tab to leave notices to readers but this story uses the announcements in the actual story to fill out the word count. I read it for the daily limited free which allowed me to make it to chapter 130ish and I started unlocking chapters with coins up to around 270ish. It is a great story but I actually started skipping chapters to save coins because the ones I skipped didn't have much substance to them. It felt like the announcements were equal to 1/6th of the actual story we were getting each chapter.Too bad I would have liked to keep reading but I can't justify spending my money for hardly anything in return.
I would say that I am having fun reading this right now despite some of the writing errors however the big downfall of the novel for me is that the story progression is too slow. I know that it is a new novel but taking more than 5-10 chapters for a scene to progress is kind of annoying but all in all it still fun
Although the the system isnt too pervertedly possessing type but the way the beasts talk , think , This Is just ridiculously stupid ?
One of the best ond peice novels I’ve read
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Novel kinda mid, the author needs to get better .............................................................................................
i know this type of novel doesn't have anything special all they gonna do is add Nationalism or make some cliche things with Chinese medicine but for god's sake be a unique one i will change my rating if it's bad
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feels like it's some copy paste novel