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Okay, my review could be called unfair as I only read 4 chapters.
But it just doesn't make sense.
He picks a sword and jump to the skeletons in his first time in a VRG, he also explains he wasn't afraid of them because he has Battle Mode, like if his real life also had skills and fight in the streets to learn his skills(nothing of that was explained, nor how the Battle mode). Also, the no fear made no sense.
Then in the same 1.- day and just after like 2 hours he already has perfect swordmanship(he is the successor of the style) to do perfect moves, fight a captain skeleton and do 999,999 dmg in one atk.
I just don't get it, nor the life and past of our MC or the fact that he do like 2 months of game play in a normal rpg in less than 3 hours and learning to use a sword perfectly without any experience.
I really have no idea how people give perfect scores and reviews here where perfection doesn't even exist.
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Not a lot of logic here, translation is not to good too, but still not a 1 star review as most say.
I can give it a 3.
Not a lot of logic here, translation is not to good too, but still not a 1 star review as most say.
I can give it a 3.
Going by the synopsis Clive would have a talent that is about 100,000 times worse than normal people. Actually really heartbreaking for such a human to exist. That means that what people can accomplish in 1 day Clive would need around 270 years.
I like it, but it feels like I’m reading every other senior brother cultivation novel I’ve ever read. i like the golden finger of this novel but it’s really under used in my opinion.
It's a clickbait. The Summary/Title don't match the written story. The real Title must be something like "Protagonist Girls with System are Chasing me After I Got Transmigrated in my Own Novel".
Interestiny characters and a non invasive system. what more could you want
Overall the writing quality is decent and simplistic.
Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand.
I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves.
I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!
The book is amazing! the first chapter is hooks u up right away! I love the way he expresses the characters! Plot is good and it’s mostly like an anime! Keep going Author!