Hello, Author here!
I've officially finished a whole volume and now, I can tell you a bit about the story and say things that I wish for the future.
1: The main character is a teenage boy who suddenly (re)gained powers. He doesn't know much about the world of superhumans; Streia.
2: The first volume isn't too well done since it was my first time writing a whole volume like this, I'll be sure to make the future volumes better.
[Skip Exodia 23 - 26 since I believe they have plot holes. And they're also badly written. It's a flashback, so don't worry.]
3: This is of the harem genre but the harem won't officially start until either after or during Volume 3. I can say this with 100% certainty.
4: I'm a selfish author. I may add in things that I believe are cool or that I believe the readers will find interesting.
5: I write to please myself but also since I enjoy it. I get happy when I see more and more reading my book.
Please, enjoy my book!
P.S. I'm a selfish author, that's why I'm giving myself 5 stars.
A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!
Love this story. It is progressing well and I am always waiting for the next chapter to be posted on pins and needles. Keep up the good work.
Everyone this is just my personal views on this novel.
This novel is awesome and has a lot of potential to be with the top 50.If you like mmorpg martial gamer then i bet you will like this novel because of the similarities like clans in modern world and a runaway from his clan. So its quite similar also i think it has the game mechanics like 100% completion rate stuff like that so I guess it is inspired by that novel.
Author pls dont spam his Attributes its annoying also pls do this to your attributes 50 --- 68 so we wont get confused of what changed. I hope that you will post a stable update for us and Good Luck writing this novel.
I loved the first volume 10/10 for me but i hate second volume same amount.It is too long and boring to be fair i did skim trough last 100 chapters because i couldnt bear with it. I hopr next volume will be better.
Absolutely stunning details! This book truly throws you in the action of it all. This would definitely make a outstanding movie, I applaud you!
Well, tbh the storyline quite similiar to those romance r*pe and child novel, but this novel do not have r*pe.
With only few chapter the author make me feels like in roller coaster.
I don't like a painfull love story, and this story is a painfull one. But I choose to read because it has few chapter. It has a fluffy scene too, and.... Ehem... A hot scene too.
I'm tired of those romance novel they said, but it full of face slaping, never ending white lotus. But the novel hardly make me feel like on roller coaster and satisfied.
This novel have it all, an independent woman, white lotus, heart break, lovey dovey and I'm satisfied.
Thanks for the novel~
As all bias author's I can say with certainty I worked hard and I believe I did a good job. Hope you enjoy my novel and Ning Fan's second life. If you find anything you believe I should fix I'll consider it and keep it in mind but the direction of the story shall not change even I'm excited to see what's next hehehe I will try my best to keep up with everyone's pace not too fast that people can't enjoy it but also not too slow where everyone loses interest.
I'm being honest i like it i recommend 100%
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As of the time I am making this review ( 5/19/2023) i have finished 278 chapters, and all I can say is that I am amazed by this authors genius.
For the review I will split it into 5 sections Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design.
Writing Quality:
5/5
The writing quality is superb, The language and depictions on environments emotion and everything in-between thoroughly
immerses the reader into the characters.
Stability of updates:
5/5
as of 5/19/2023 the author updates the the story with a chapter everyday sometimes even multiple.
Story Development:
5/5
The story development is phenomenal. It evolves throughout the entire story leaving the reader eagerly waiting for the next development. The author expertly weaves the story through the characters and unlike many other authors makes the story feel alive and connected.
Character Design:
5/5
The character Design is the best part of the book the author not only explores the emotion and depth of the main character but others as well. Not only that but the character development of the main character is the best I have ever seen on webnovel, The main character goes through many struggles evolving his perspective on himself, the world and others. If you are looking for a purely evil main character this story is not for you. The main character is more than a villain. He is a human, he evolves and changes and although at some points he is villainous that is not all he is.
World Background:
4/5
Although the World background is the worst part of the 4 other points of review it is still fairly good. The author does go into detail about the background of the world but in the grand scheme of the story I feel as though it's not enough.
(spoilers ahead)
The dimension's that the main character goes to don't have that much substance, you cant really feel the background that these dimension's have affecting the story in any tangible manner and you don't really feel engaged in what happens to the dimensions, For example the main character goes to a realm which is massive, thousands of kingdoms within a single empire, the leader of each kingdom being stronger than the main character. what's unfortunate is that you never really feel engaged with the empire/kingdoms. making them feel rather 1 dimensional. You really feel this 1 dimensionality when some kingdoms to war and you don't really care or feel intrigued about the outcome of the world. That being said I don't really think it dragged the story down that much because the story is more focused of the development of the main character and those around him.
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Perhaps my thoughts on this book will worsen but so far this is one of if not the best stories on webnovel, would definitely recommend.
It's nice, I enjoyed it. It's like reading about a typical shounen protagonist that wins out of sheer luck.