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damn predictable and trashy.
it's cliche as hell, hypocritical as hell, annoying mc as hell.
why this got selected out of all the good trial reads, hell if i know.
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2. only get 5 chapters before premium
3. really dog water
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Seems to be a very wish fulfillment type novel. I've read up to ch55 MTL and it feels like every single character and scene exists to make the MC look better.
On ch52 there's even a scene where the author praises the MC's amazing observation power for guessing that a table he was going towards had three people because he could see two people sitting down and that one chair had a jacket on it.
Also, a lot of the time I felt like I was just reading mob characters excitedly go "he's done for now" even when they had no beef with him. Every character not on MC's side is literally out to get him.
Author setup a really grand setting ranging over all of space and different civilizations so maybe you could look forward to that tho.
Alright this novel is a horrible video game novel. Lucky drops galore alongside incomprehensible game mechanics. If you can ignore the fact that it's a game novel then you might get some sliver of enjoyment out of it as long as you don't think too deeply. All in all, it's not worth more than 3 stars, and I'm being generous.
The novel is good but the orthography is bad, if the author improve his orthography (or gets a editor)and edits all the chapter I can see this novel in a much higher rank.
Bro I will support you man, but you gotta do a better job with the MC. He’s is a f*****g beta man. Come on you could portray him better than that. Idk if you plan on fixing his mentality as the story goes on but right now your MC is making story suck. It’s my honest opinion man. Everything else is dandy, your MC is just not cutting it.
Well first this novel has a very stable update and is filled with long chapters so if you are looking for a story that won't be dropped then you came to the right place also if you are looking for a mc that actually uses his brain then this is the story also if you are looking for relationships that actually develop and mean something then this is the place to go and finally op mc
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Writing quality is pretty disappointing. The premise is interesting and I believe that this novel certainly could be good. It’s just I can’t deal with the amount of mistakes and choppy sentence structure. I understand that your first language probably isn’t English and as such I’m still giving you a decent review. People obviously like your work so keep at it. :)
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you and this book is so
The content in the novel was highly professional, the author seems very clear about the vocabulary and vision of the novel. The mystery of the story seems very attractive to read. Loved the overall quality of the novel! keep it up!