The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
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I do not mind clichés as long as it is done right. This novel sadly doesn't do that at all. The cultivation system was intriguing, that is the only redeeming feature of this novel.
The MC is very naive and ignorant of everything so he is easy to get manipulated and easily attaches great importance to people who are exploiting him for their own benefits due to his heaven defying talent. You would think because of regularly the author highlights how talented he is, he would not be targeted by his clan but no there's always conflicts between him and the other members. One gets defeated, there is a reaction and recurring misunderstanding then the dad/brother/uncle show up. Also nobody really helps their most talented member. Even when he is in trouble they wanna see how far he can go and what are his secret cards are.
I got very irritated in short.
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WHere is the creativity I got reincarnated as a shinai I got reincarnated as a stick I got reincarnated as a ring I got reincarnated as a sword ots honestly sad and this book is annoying
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Also the mc is really childish
In my opinion the story is very good. My only issue with it is that it is too heavily focused on the relationship. If the author would add more background and plot the story would be amazing.
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Enough to get my attention. The story is good too. The main character of this novel is very good, and hopefully he can return to being a professional player.
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This is my opinion if you dont agree just read the Novel.
Ive Read 40 chapters so far.
In my opinion its not that gd of a story to invest uf time in and definetly not Worth Paying for. the chapters are short abd the story develops slowly. As of the 40 chapters we barely know anything about mc goal apart from there some powerful person or family or organisation that killed his family and he wants revenge.
Charcter development kinda sucks if im honest the mc seems shallow abd theres not much too him.
Based on those two points i decided to drop it, if it was free It could be seen as a book to get by but i cant see why id invest coins into the book.
This is only be opinion, so if you dont like It then read it but i wouldnt recommend.
What did I just read? I actually wasted my time reading this only to find out that MC actually gets together with his cheating wife? Are you joking me author? I am just so mad that I will give 1 star, sorry. I usually want to make proper review, but I now hate my life because reading this story.