It's a decent system book, and I like the ML. However, sometimes the writing style can be a little off, but for the most part it's good.I'm curious to see where this goes.
I think the novel is very good and upon a read, the story is very different but I think the synopsis makes this story just look like a copy of the Hitting Zone and well they have similar premises they are executed differently so I when you read the synopsis just give it a chance.
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Character development, ok. World building ok-ish. Grammar, ok. Druid class, more than ok and not the usual swordsman/mage/assassin.
Mad Snail = questionable.
I decided to start over from chapter 1 -
This is a good book at least in terms of quality, in terms of quantity and update stability it is crap. I would love to read this book more and I am sure plenty of others would as well, but the updates are so rare it just doesn't make it worth the wait. Author if you read this please update more frequently as I am sure plenty of people would read the book.
Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 starsWriting qualityIt s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story developmentNow i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character designNow, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39). Update stabilityWell, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World backgroundI don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 starsOverall 2.6
This Novel is quite interesting. Mc goes to another world and build village, kingdom e.t.c which must be last 300 year.Story quite good.. MC have to face different enemy and race who wants to destroy the village or kingdom.but later story is because sometimes like repeat in middle.I strongly suggest you read this novel or Levi hates you.also give it a like for Levi.
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Your story is great! I love how you cliffhang. It made me want to wait for another chapter. Nice characters specially Yuuki and i love how unique your writing style.
i know this is not a perfect novel, but i can say i really enjoy reading this and i hope this story can be more and more interesting. thanks for the author and for the translator. good job!