The story is original and kinf of interesting but the MC is too much, he is dense and always act to prove the author's ideas no matter of the consistency.
So the story is resultoriented and as the author don't care about consistencies and nonesenses, the story flow is unnatural, forced, boring.
English isn't my 1st language so that's why mistakes in the writing that insert contradictions is disturbing for me... I'm not stupid so i can understand what the author mean but it's repeatitive mitake so it's TIRING!!! I'm not a tranlator... why should i translate it anyway, it's not my job, FFS!
It is a well written fictional historical novel with battles and maybe a rise to power of the MC. I think it's a kind of mix of the great Roman empire and the Middle Age. The story is very original compared to the same boring Chinese war/kingdom building/ historical novels. To conclude, in regard of what's already released, the best is yet to come.
Slow progress, I don't mind it but if you're going to keep making it slow you should update a lot of chapters regularly it's hard to get hooked on it if you do it this way.Lastly, I like the plot
horrible translator, it's better to just find the raw and read MTL
I didn’t have many expectations for this at first, but it’s a lot better then I was expecting like the author says though it is a little slow at first but then gets really good fast. Definitely recommend.
Fights in this are like in Kung fu movies, MC fights 30 enemies of same cultivation and they just stand there and get killed by MC while all he gets is a couple cuts. It’s too exaggerated but fine, I can ignore it cause he fouGht beasts in the forest for 1 year so he got super combat sense now and everybody else never fought before in their life.
the background of the story is good, though a bit unclear, I wish there were paragraph separations, it all seems like one block of text... it can definitely improve and it has hella potential! keep going!
This author has a talent for ruining his own story, and changing it completly out of no where and adding a crap ton of plot holes and contradictions that arnt hidden at all, he is also good at writing terrible 'heart warming and sad' moments, I ran seriously some of the stuff he pits in this is so retarded, Iran going to the queens birth day and killing people wtf?? lin being married off ?? wdym it was stated he decided to go back to Britain with her if not she would of stayed in huxia, how did it become she went back to get married off the author clearly has no idea what he is writing or just started a new book entirely and then accidently joined the two without reliz8ng it and posted like seriously it is just so dumb and frustrating to read, probably one of the most forced books I have ever read.
This is like a sorta slice-of-life tragedy where many struggles and life-impacting events are thrown at the MC. The plot is sooo nice and flow of story ish also amazing. If you like novels with lots of POVs and tragedies, then I think you would like this book. Good job thus far author!
10/10
This story will not waste your time!
I am surprised though that I only found out about this story just now. The quality of the story is great. It is one of those stories that has a unique concept that is not common around.
I must say, this is my first time to read about same-*** love interest. It is not easy to write if you do not have enough material or inspiration to utilize. The Author-nim seems to be great at using certain emotions for the readers to feel the same way.
I enjoyed it so far, too bad I do not have much coins to use because I have only few left and I am saving it for gifting.
Please give this story a chance and try to read this!
Must-read!
I have read this novel and the elements are so good! this had captured my interest as Multiple RPG games that i like was embedded as a concept in here, it's just unfortunate that it only has 60 chapters! [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Finally!!! I've been waiting for QIDIAN pick this novel ever since i've read it! The novel is very funny, well built... One of my fav novels.
Ps: I've read until chap. 42 before was dropped in another site.