Author, are you going to finish this story? This is such an amazing story with awesome characters, so I hope you do ...
It is ongoing, an dos not seem to be adding new chapters, coming to the “end”, you are told that the book is becoming a series…
I like the plot of the story very much, BUT I think the story is a bit messy in all kind of ways. Should have more story line from the school, and they should be collegeage
Thrilling and captivating.
Why no update please update
The best book in this app. It's was so emotional and well written. Gongratulations Cassandra M.....️
Good book...I enjoyed reading this and had problems putting it down..
I want to know what's next I'm waiting for days
Review up to ch 52:
This story is akin to eating a bowl of white rice with no salt. Its food, but it tastes like nothing.
Its an interesting story but bland in practicality with barely any exciting action due to its slow burn nature and with the addition of no actual romance or equally strong antagonistic entity, this story lacks any substance.
It is like going through stacks of report or reading log files of an application.
Is it like eminence in the shadow,where we get mentions of protagonist's training or is it just a skip to op, with no mention of training?
Edit: I've read the first chapter. It is exactly like eminence in the shadows, with the MC training for an imaginary ideal, then reincarnated into a magic world and immediately figuring things out.
My opinion about this novel is that I adore the female lead (FL), but I generally dislike the male leads (MLs). The FL has a distinct personality and a compelling backstory, with well-developed motivations that make her character engaging. She adds depth and interest to the story, making it tolerable, though others might not share the sentiment. I understand that the novel follows the common trope of Chinese cultivation stories, with the FL consuming numerous pills daily, engaging in illegal pill sales, and indulging in a cycle of spending all her money and then buying ingredients to create more. This portrayal might send mixed messages to young readers about drugs.
The initial introduction of the MLs struck me as unsettling due to their obsessive behavior towards the FL, physically manipulating her and desperately seeking her control or servitude. The forced soul oaths and lack of consent for the lifelong servitude contract were particularly disturbing, especially when the first ML persisted despite her clear disapproval.
What pushed me over the edge was around chapter 26, revealing that the MLs' actions were driven by their past memories, not genuine love or respect. They were essentially chasing her as an apology for their past wrongdoings, undermining the novel's focus on the FL's impact on the world. It became absurd to see multiple attractive characters constantly surveilling her and assisting her without proper reasons, especially given their questionable morality.
I decided to drop the novel after chapter 99, primarily due to the contrived event in chapter 96, where the author felt the "main ML" needed more attention. The author introduced a catastrophic event that transported the FL to a location accessible only to him, seemingly just to give him more screen time. Despite the story having an abundance of plot armor, this particular twist felt excessive and unrealistic.
thanks for the heads up
jesus christ, stop commenting about the damn chamber of commerce