I'm gonna be voting all the way for this novel I won't let it be lost like the others it must be spread in its greatness.FillerFillerFiller
I am excited to read this story? it seems like it is full of adventures and love and everything that make an awesome story ????????????
I droped this as soon as I read the kid character being described as sexy. This is pedo bait for lolicons who are into grooming. In fact, I expect the rest of this novel to a bunch of pedo pandering. This is not the kind of content I want to see on webnovel.
Hey! Author here! Just gonna write a shameless review real quick... 5 Stars! Why? Because i'm shameless... ExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpOh, and one more thing.This novel might or might not get premium later on.I'm thinking of starting a contract with webnovel, but I also want you guys to be able to read my novel freely.We all have very hard lives, and this novel was created to give you some time to get that weight off your shoulders and make you happy.That's why I made this comedy novel anyways!To brighten someone's day.
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This is truly amazing! I've read a few chapters and was amazed of how good the writing was. It's really rare to find good treasures like this. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more.
Too fast paced and confusing from the get go. Dont know why he returned 18 yrs back, if its an alternative universe, parallel universe. He relationships with secondary characters also , they make no sense in the first few chapters. No build up to there interactions. Its like 'Blaam' in your face writing style. Even the mc and the class monitor, he returns back, finds out his old self was heartbroken about a rejection, his new self suddenly likes her. The writting style is bad, it goes from 1 to 10 in a few sentences. ??Sorry to the author but not my cup of tea.
Not bad, am not really into fictional stories but this one is pretty good. Some grammar errors are present though, but who doesn't make them. Keep up the good work, you're doing great.
A genuinely brilliant work. The characters are multidimensional and realistic, the setting and attention to historical detail are superb. The story itself is also great, building at a good pace with a really interesting premise. I love the way that Gengyo adapts to the world that he's been sent to. The action is also exciting and nicely presented, I hope that Gengyo will use more of the sword / be more formally schooled in it in the near future also, as I imagine that it would be very exciting! Thank you Nick for what's looking like an amazing novel. I really hope that you continue to stick with it as in terms of overall quality this is the best that I've seen on Webnovel.
Yeah a sports novel! I liked the first chapters. The system seams a bit boring at the moment, but I'm sure that it will be expandet with new functions and stuff.
As a avid Pokémon fan, I loves stories that have monster element in it. This novel answer that need, however it fail in its trainer element. The author try to make his trainer walk in the unique path. The path that normal trainers choose to avoided or failed midway. But the reason that M.C. manage to success is (in my opinion) not logical. His will power is stronger than 90% of the population (who choose the same technique) - because he want to be a champion and the fear he experience in his childhood. Just 2 of these reasons push him ahead of those 90% who fail midway. Unbelievable.I love that he put a great important to his bird, but the first monster can decided a person’s fate. By choosing an extremely low level monster as his first partner, he jinx himself to be just a low level trainer. And what make me feels complicated is that his family’s future is depend on him! His lovely mother and father’s (who are in debt because the invasion of monster horde) - situation could improve a lot if he choose high grade monster (which is available for him because he is a topper in his class) but no, his foundation is bad, his mana is low, his mana absorption rate is also low and he has to purify his mana manually while the other can do it automatically.Too many set back to the point that I have to drop it. But I have to say that their character’s interaction is pretty good. Except when their are sound effect in the scene. Seriously, the siren sound “SIREN SIREN” is lame
before you start this novel just dont take this novel seriously because there are many plot holes and missing information.I also think the author likes to drag things on like those fashion show that appear every chapter, to the point that there more fashion shows then actual story.