"Of course, Luo Xiao Jie," Xu CaiKun replied. "Young Master is very fond of you."
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Ba-dump, Ba-dump, Ba-dump.
As Yang Chi Huan spoke, his face expression started to turn weird before continuing
- Alright, let's see this cloaking working. – They nod and take a step back. I press the button, and for a brief moment, blue electricity covers both me and the vulture, and shortly, we turn completely invisible.
"Ah… Haa… Silver's… so hot…"
People say that they'll write more in this summer since school is over but for me...it is true but I instead procrastinate in writing even more than if I were in school. How's summer vacation coming along for you guys?
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Noah caress Lei's face and they're started giving off a fluffy aura.
"Su Shi, do you feel like your going to breakthrough? Suppress it immediately.!"
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There are some mistakes, obviously, the most serious being that the boss and the other "people" are shocked and then find an absurd excuse for a "person" to knock down a tree with one blow. It needs romance, after all it is a vampire story. And I would really like it to have a development of creating a vampire kingdom/clan with the MC leading it. And obviously the MC finding a way to neutralize the weaknesses of his new race, that's the most obvious point. Anyone with 2 brain cells wouldn't want to lose control or have a lapse like an intermittent madman because of blood or something else.Final: Writing 5; Update 4; Story 4; Character 3; World 5...