prashant_dasari
Quite an interesting read, I have to say, the only problem I had with this was the author's proficency in the English language(not saying that I am better by any means, it just felt awkward). Overlooking that, the premise is quite cool(might be biased because I just like ghosts in general). There's only 10 chapters so far, so imma leave this here, so that the author updates more, before that, 5★. First time writing a review on something, so I might not have included all the important things that a review should have, oops.- Eggs are divine, ResLiF.
Hello im reviewing again not for the actual review (sorry i already did that)Just wanna ask if author has socmed accounts where I can talk about the book. do you have discord?
this story is a good getting stronger and getting revenge story. the plot so far has been straight forward and easy to understand. The early chapters are rough. lots of scene transitions are missing and names are mixed up making it difficult to follow. this gets cleared up but it's not perfect.the plot is pretty decent, humor is good. the skills op has are grounded and very little of it has been "plot armor" though he does get overly cocky. (as of 130)the world itself could be filled in a little better. our main character knows a lot but never really justifies knowledge of obscure things. but at the same time now that History has changed he at least is not omniscient and is only knowledgeable about "famous" things.it is good and I hope the author keeps it up pros:not harem heavymain character is strong and cleverrevenge filledcons:editing and name switching makes some chapters hard to follow the world building could use a little morepeople sometimes appear without introduction
The writing style is awesome, the story is intriguing and I am so inlove with Alex here. let's see what happens. keep the good work Author!
Thank you for your hard work Author.Thank you for your hard work Author.Thank you for your hard work Author.Thank you for your hard work Author.
an intriguing tale of modern world meeting the occult.
I came here to cry, and the tears we're delivered! Cant wait for more!!!
So far. everything was good. Well. some people might hate Yuri and NTR but still it was written well. I hope author don't tries to force himself into removing Yuri and NTR just because of some bad reviews. Because it might ruin how story was progressing.Just imagine. He is doing with more than 5-20 people at once. and there is no Yuri? that will be pure stupidity, besides his brainwashing skill make his girls accept anything what he is doing, so those girls easily accept other girls. And he is not the kind of character who is building harem because he loves them. He is doing all this because of his objective. and he taking care of his women also because he is possessive and not because he loves them. I think this story one of the best i have read. Those who are complaining should just read tag before reading. And i will not recommend reading this novel if you are used to reading goody two shoes type MCs.
it's a nice novel......interesting so far
Sakolomé and bakuzan are for the moment but preferred. I must not deny also that I like Salomé and the other bakuran but I wait see the continuation not bad continue like that
not my cup of tea, mc all he does is whine, oh poor me, my life socks, you all suck, so emo mc, reading about his thoughts a real put off, you bastard serves you right.
As the author, I'm naturally inclined to give my own novel 5 stars, but I understand that only you, the readers, can truly decide if it lives up to that. I encourage you to dive into the story, form your own opinions, and share your thoughts.While the pace starts slow, it gradually picks up momentum after the first few chapters, so I hope you'll stick around to experience the unfolding journey. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'm always here to answer any questions you have. Happy reading, and I hope you enjoy the journey!
