Just started reading and will ready more the next days. nice and interesting beginning
The story seems very interesting with lots of potential, but I'm very sorry to say this, but the writing quality is not that great.... ? Some paragraphs are broken on wrong places, being cut in half in the middle of a dialogue. And some parts are written like you are writing a script instead of a story + the way you write the actions around the dialogue is unnatural and off putting.Don't take my feedback to the heart, I'm just saying this because I wish for you to improve so I can enjoy the story. Please continue to write ?
Of course, I have to give my own work 5 stars. However, if you like a lot of mystery, not just in the world, but also in your MC, then this novel will be perfect for you. I do plan on this being a harem, but not some kind of waifu collecting simulator. It might also turn into a polyamorous type of relationship. Anyways, if you like yuri with a smart MC and kingdom building, give this novel a shot.
Author here , first book. Hope you enjoy the story. 5 chapters minimum released everyweek. It’s gonna be crazy
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love the story and the mc background and how it has a game system that will help him get stronger.
I mean, I think it's pretty good, but I'm very biased. Still, if given the chance, might as well advertise it myself. It's a slow burn, and he doesn't get OP quick, nor do I know if he ever will. It's not a typical power-fantasy. You probably won't like every single plot development, because taste differs. There are more lighthearted, and also darker parts. I, as an author, would recommend you read all of it. The story gets better with every chapter, or so I like to think, as the world and cast expands, but if you really can't stand the writing, that's fine as well. In any case, I hope you decide to give my story a try, and can see past it's flaws.
So far the novel is amazing, and chapter 5 was PEAK. Ottabie, I known you are listening. Please give me more Lieutenant Kross. Anything is fine so PLEASE give me more chapters.
still chapter 1.but it's ok. My first fantasy novel here....NO BL PLS... ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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So far this is a really good story I love how it's progressing it keeps getting better and better misha's character is seeing things anew this is a great read I recommend