The story is well-written which shows the skill of the author in writing. It has a solid world background but putting a lot of introduction for the first chapter makes the intro of the story a bit low in the intense aspect. The storyline caught my interest so I hope you can make the story more exciting in the following chapters ahead since there are only 3 chapters currently.
overall evrything is good sorry for being shame less?
"Can't let you do that…." Issei said cryptically with his evil grin emblazoned on his face and the eyes of a killer. He grabbed Tsubaki before she could react; his hand was rammed deep through her chest. A scream never being heard.
I just nodded, because it really sound interesting. Who knows?
"You will no longer laugh when you, enter the Purify room," said Nurseman while forcing me to stand up.
What is it purify room looks like? I'm pretty curious right now.
"There were a few rogues who wanted to make trouble. We thought there were three in total. But, the fourth one caught me off guard. None of us caught his scent. I lead him away from others when he attacked and thought I had finished him when he retaliated and did some damage to me. He escaped after that."
gender: male
Yes he is and we Army's need to keep it that way
"I mean, I did create the world..." I added.
I turn to the window seat and climb up, then carefully plant my feet on the windowsill. I look down at the black hole that, like a window, separates our palace from the rest of the universe. The black abyss setting a boundary I was never to cross. But they say love knows no bounds.
Time passes.