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This novel is soooo good! I ẹnoyed reading it so so much!! I'm a new reader, and please don't drop it :
Very bad story, the plot is inexisant, the charachters make no sense at all and they're stupid. The translation is very bad, except changing the chinese names in occidental ones and same for the locations, everything else is still the same so a lot of things make no sense.... I could write a book about how bad this is.At least put forward good novels.
Great start author!Highly recommended this book, the story flows well and the descriptions are innovative and creative.Characters are likeable and humorous.Keep up the hard work author!
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Im not sure why this gets such a high rating. Its perfectly fine to read, dont get me wrong, but I think a 5 is overboard. At least for the first 100 chapters.
progression system is nice. fast paced but not lightning.
powers are cool and while not entirely unique, are like a 4/5 which is great.
Plenty of fighting and mc is very strong.
Side characters are replaceable and have no function other than slightly useful damaging units.
overarching plot to save the family is out of sight, out of mind.
Conflict pops up but often have no emotional impact towards the main character.
Definitely not bad overall though
I cant understand how Douluo dalu and soul land works. Like where does it start and which book is the first one?? And what about the comics like?? Can someone please help me out
First of all it started very good but as the story went on it started to get quite unrealistic and annoying, The MC is much more talented the other people yet he add a group of young people to his band? and all of them agree? they all move together? The MC adding them together was a mistake.
In my opinion the story could've been the story would've been much more enjoyable if that didn't happen.
Not worth reading
The mc is actually useless. He progressed so fast in the first couple of days,
Is this a joke? Where's the ambition, the urgency - emotions even!
I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN.
Lets talk about:
1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'.
2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel.
3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans.
3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress.
And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME.
4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example:
1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES.
The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.
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I can’t wait for this one, the author is great at creating unusual circumstances to bring about a funny joke, laughs will be bright. The author is also good at making a new story type that has characters that seem to be smart and dumb in the best way.
Can’t wait!
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